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for When You're Not Looking

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!! Love the bit about men not being able to read with a hard on - truer words were never spoken ;-). The conversation between Draco and Charlie was also great - especially the dig at Lucius and Narcissa. And Luna - she just scares me ;-)

Brilliantly appropriate choice of songs for the grand return of the Review Sing-Along (snort!). And I even learned something. Elton John was married to a woman? Really? LOL! So cheers to 'The Bitch Is Back' by Sir Elton John, even though I'm afraid I'm dating myself...
person colao
schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Blaise and Hermione are too damn cute!
person Betty
schedule October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Please update ASAP. I cant get enough, i need more!!!
Xoxxx
schedule October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lucius and Severus are both hilarious and adorable. And I'm left without words to describe the utter stupidity of Ron's plan and my dismay that Harry was moronic enough to go along with it. May I borrow Blaise? Please? He's smokin' hot!

Thinking about withholding reviews in a pathetic attempt to get you to bring the review sing-along back ;-)...
person colao
schedule October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, now, wasn't that just chuck full of hot deliciousness
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, Snape and Malfoy finding Hermione's soulmate totally cracks me up! Love Blaise too!
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Naughty, naughty Hermione... Love it! God, Ron and Harry really are idiots - LOL! More please...
person Betty
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story im totally hooked. Are Luc's nd sev's result gona be blaise? Ohhh i cant wait. Please update ASAP
Xoxxxx
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hurray - you're back!!!!! This is a really promising start to what I'm sure will be another fantastic story. But what's really great is that I've been wanting to read 'The Reluctant Detectives' again for about 6 weeks, but could remember neither the title nor the author. This post prompted my memory and I'm now happily making my way through all your other stories again while waiting for the next chapter. You've made my day. Thanks!
person dracosgirl007
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is great!!! I like the fact that you made Draco gay. (thought he might be anyway) So anyway, I am definitely looking forward to another chapter!