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for When You're Not Looking

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person MotekElm
schedule October 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

great story

person Emma
schedule April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so far!!! Can't wait to read the rest!!!
person Emma
schedule April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really liked this story. Just the right amount of sexy and funny. Lots of unconventional coupling too!!! ^^
schedule May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Tu sei l'unica persona che sa saggiamente che per migliorare il tono muscolare per fare l'amore
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've never read a Blaise/Hermione fic before and that was amazing! Gods he sounds so sexy. Fantastic job. Love the italian :)
schedule February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lol this is great!!
schedule February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yum yum I love it.
schedule February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yum yum I love it.
person Willow de Amour
schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The Bitch is Back Elton John

Loving the story. Nice couples. I look forward to reading more.
schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Blaise and Hermione are wonderful. And the conversation between Bill and Charlie had an authentic ring to it. Well done.

Had to look up this chapter's song 'Shipwrecked' by Shane Alexander. What was particularly amusing, however, is that you used the title of a song my 9 year old suggested would be a good review sing-a-long song in the body of this chapter (and no, of course he's not reading your stuff - we just play a version of your game in the car ;-). So here's your lyrics: "I ain't had a review in over a year / Our Jamacain review's gonna start right here.". Enjoy!