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November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
INTENSE. Love it. It's amazing how much characterization and plot you're fitting into this story with only one set. It reminds me of a play.
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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
jumped the gun their a bit young master malfoy. Still, i think his control, with under his nose, was quite admirable.
Even so, Har allowing him to see his weakness was a gift, on that i think malfoy almost threw away with that stunt. It'll take him a while to get that 'trust' back even with the ministry out to get them both. I wonder what it will take for Har to side with Malfoy... or at least turn on the ministry.
Even so, Har allowing him to see his weakness was a gift, on that i think malfoy almost threw away with that stunt. It'll take him a while to get that 'trust' back even with the ministry out to get them both. I wonder what it will take for Har to side with Malfoy... or at least turn on the ministry.
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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So intense! I like how in this story you only know what happens in the vampire lair. You only know what happens outside of it if it is explained. Harry and Draco's relationship is very strained. I feel like there is a small thread of trust that could be broken with any wrong move from either party. Although I think Draco has a stronger hold on that thread. Love this story, keep up the great work!
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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, i'm in need for sunshine too:D
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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
You are NOT UPDATING THIS FAST ENOUGH. Nothing is being updated fast enough. You need to write faster, so I can read more! At any rate, I LOVED THIS, can't wait for the next installment. And maybe one day you'll get a proper review out of me again. XD
On a side note, do you know when thrnbrooke disappeared? Has she been reviewing anything of yours? She's been around for years, and she always reviews EVERYTHING, but I haven't seen her around lately.
You are NOT UPDATING THIS FAST ENOUGH. Nothing is being updated fast enough. You need to write faster, so I can read more! At any rate, I LOVED THIS, can't wait for the next installment. And maybe one day you'll get a proper review out of me again. XD
On a side note, do you know when thrnbrooke disappeared? Has she been reviewing anything of yours? She's been around for years, and she always reviews EVERYTHING, but I haven't seen her around lately.
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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #7...
1. What is wrong him??? O_o You don't enter a house
full of vampires, unless you're suicidal or one cocky
bastard!
2. I have to admit Harry gotz a pair of serious BIG
hairy balls on him to actually backhand a vampire...and
a leader at that! Draco has to get him back in some way.
Other than that, this was good. :-)
1. What is wrong him??? O_o You don't enter a house
full of vampires, unless you're suicidal or one cocky
bastard!
2. I have to admit Harry gotz a pair of serious BIG
hairy balls on him to actually backhand a vampire...and
a leader at that! Draco has to get him back in some way.
Other than that, this was good. :-)
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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh, I just happened to have seen Yami Bakura's review..the last time
Thrnbrooke posted was back in Jan/Feb. I think she came back recently
some months back, but she comes here every once in a blue moon now.
..which is understandable, every now & then you have to get away from
here or you might get caught in another fandom OR real life needs your
attention at the moment.
Thrnbrooke posted was back in Jan/Feb. I think she came back recently
some months back, but she comes here every once in a blue moon now.
..which is understandable, every now & then you have to get away from
here or you might get caught in another fandom OR real life needs your
attention at the moment.
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*winces. Okay, who's out there deliberately vampy baiting... still, i can believe that's the kind of crap the ministry would pull if things weren't going there way.
Well, your response to my last comment was fairly proven in this chappie. heh, draco doesn't want him to go back. Still, he'd lose a powerful ally if Har didn't go back.
Well, your response to my last comment was fairly proven in this chappie. heh, draco doesn't want him to go back. Still, he'd lose a powerful ally if Har didn't go back.
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #5...
So, this is when everything changes for the both of
them, at the moment Harry confessed. But, what can
Harry become for Draco?
So, this is when everything changes for the both of
them, at the moment Harry confessed. But, what can
Harry become for Draco?
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And Harry should have punched him, but still it's an entertaining notion.
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