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about #9...

Damn, was this the shortest chapter or what? O_o

I'm beginning to forget things and just how DID Draco
become a vampire, I've read so many stories this week,
they're starting to blend together. Would you consider a one shot
on what happened?

I like this story, but just few sentences in English (with terrible grammar)take me half a hour, I am not dead, I am reading your updates with my pasive language skills. I apologize for lack of rewiews.I wonder how will look relationship with this kind of vampire, even if he is Malfoy, he feels really like beast, ehm scary being? :) and even thought Harry feels strong, will it be enought, if Malfoy leaped on him, but he dont want that, right? he wish to win him over, but then what? I actually think about how would this relationship work on daily basis. Snack and sex, or will it be more? Malfoy really caring for Harry like lover? How it will look like, yes that s important, how it will look like when for example living together? How will this kind of vampire Malfoy picture ideal life with Harry or death?

Chapter 9

Gwee again for this one! Lovelovelove.

Also, yay. It's harder for things like this, anonymous except for pen names, because I have no way of getting in touch with people. "OMG, HAVE YOU SEEN SOANDSO?" etc.

oh, my ^^ very VERY interesting plot! The sexual tension between them is WOW

About Ch 8:

The anticipation in this chapter is delicious! I'm really enjoying this fic :D

woah, that's huge! An arrogant being like a v lord and a Malfoy besides, acknowledging Har as his equial?... man, that's MEGA. At any rate, Draco was right about a submissive Har. In this instance it comes across false indeed.
If the ministry keeps this up they're really going to stab themselves in the hand... or what ever the wizarding equivalent is. Losing Har, even if he didn't join Draco out right, would seriously put them at a disadvantage. I imagine Har's name still has a lot of pull and he could quite easily become a rallying point. Sure, they could try and kill him but with Malfoy as his ally it wouldn't be smart.

about #8...

Oh, that was funny to me..Harry trying to calm down by any means
possible. *Harry thinking to himself* Zen Harry, think ZEN dammit, go into
that garden of peace! [..I have a wicked sense of humor..].

..and WOW, was that like a mating dance?

Chapter 8

Gwee. That's all I have to say. It's all I can say about this one. Gwee! Also, as a writer I know how hard it is. But as a reader, I also froth at the mouth and twitch a lot when you cut something off RIGHT. WHERE. IT. GETS. GOOD. and then don't update for a week or two. XD Or longer, in my case and so many others.

Also again, I'm glad to hear she's still around. It occurred to me after I left the last review that I worry about you guys, despite having a purely reader-fan to writer-gods/goddesses relationship with most of the people here. But it's been such a long relationship, spanning years now, and some of the best friends I've ever had started as the reader-fan to writer-gods/goddesses relationship, that I can't stay totally impersonal with everyone. Thrnbrooke (and you; if you ever stopped updating without explaining that you were moving to livejournal or off the net entirely, i'd go bananas with worry that something serious had happened) is one of those people who've been around for years, and I just worry, it's what I do.

Great job, can't wait to read more. I'm anxious to see what the ministry tries.

Lol, seems like he did, hit Draco is he would try to taste him.

Bloody basterd using unforgivables on Harry!