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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have done with this story, it is hard to make a good vampire fic and I must say you have done it. I'm glad Harry decided to stay this time, and I can't wait for the last chapter though I will be sad when it's over. Do you plan on writing an actual sex scene for them or not? Regardless, you have as usual portrayed both of their characters beautifully. Please keep up the fantastic work, I look forward to this and the next Sanctum Sanctorum.
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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whoe! That was a harsh betrayal.
Setting the aurors directly onto Harry. I'm wondering what Ron and Hermione their roles where.
Can't wait for the final chapter!
Cheers
Setting the aurors directly onto Harry. I'm wondering what Ron and Hermione their roles where.
Can't wait for the final chapter!
Cheers
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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love reading your work. It's always a breath of wonderful, fresh air. Being Draco and Harry scented hair only makes it that much better. :D Loved the first chapter, particularly Potter's immediate off-putting comment in retaliation to Draco's. Very nice. And Draco's last line--"Yes, if Draco must speak with someone each month, someone as powerful, intelligent, and arrogant as himself was preferable." ahhhhh perfect and funny. Thank you for a great first chapter. Your grammar, vocabulary, imagery, and witty banter was superb.
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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two:
Still spectacular, although I my eye twitched a bit at certain parts only because it didn't make sense to me. ("when the choice is possibly watch a murder happen myself because the vampire facing me might not understand I
Still spectacular, although I my eye twitched a bit at certain parts only because it didn't make sense to me. ("when the choice is possibly watch a murder happen myself because the vampire facing me might not understand I
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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three:
I think if I continue writing such detailed reviews I will just end up repeating myself. As such, a great chapter. I love the back and forth between Harry and Draco--the shifts of power are lovely.
I think if I continue writing such detailed reviews I will just end up repeating myself. As such, a great chapter. I love the back and forth between Harry and Draco--the shifts of power are lovely.
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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6:
I have chills and my mouth is dry. Enough said.
I have chills and my mouth is dry. Enough said.
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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7:
Squeals in happiness and dances around. And this is why you are my favorite fanfiction author. It's never too easy, but it's never forced. (The way the narrative plays out, that is). I loved Draco's assessment, I loved Harry's rebuttal even more. I loved the structure of the prose. That is, some statements were short and sharp, and that structure delivered all the emphasis and abruptness appropriate to the moment. I loved it. :D
Squeals in happiness and dances around. And this is why you are my favorite fanfiction author. It's never too easy, but it's never forced. (The way the narrative plays out, that is). I loved Draco's assessment, I loved Harry's rebuttal even more. I loved the structure of the prose. That is, some statements were short and sharp, and that structure delivered all the emphasis and abruptness appropriate to the moment. I loved it. :D
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November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*smirks all shiny eyed. Oh, the ministry really did it this time. They've drawn together two of the most powerful beings around and set them against them and i for one can't WAIT to see this particular explosive combination burst all over them! mwahahahahaha
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November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #14...
Wow! Talk about overkill! O_o
But, what other way can a vampire kill? Also if that
vampire happens to be one Draco Malfoy, there's only
one way to do it...with style, baby, with style!!!
Oh, and you FINALLY got them together! Good!
Wow! Talk about overkill! O_o
But, what other way can a vampire kill? Also if that
vampire happens to be one Draco Malfoy, there's only
one way to do it...with style, baby, with style!!!
Oh, and you FINALLY got them together! Good!
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November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NO! It can't be almost done!!!! It's to good! Loved this chapter!
can't wait for more, as bitter sweet as it will be.
Kit
can't wait for more, as bitter sweet as it will be.
Kit