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O.o wow. Dunno how she missed this one!!! *purrs* Vampire Draco as she has NEVER seen him. *glances at the clock and pulls a face* oh dear and now she must sleep. Afraid you're lovely tale has kept her up nearly all night. Honestly pure gold and wonder as always!!! She should know better than to start reading anything of yours late at night. She simply cannot stop until she's finished it!! Thanks so much for sharing!!!

Wonderful story, you're right, I think that Harry and Draco's reactions were more important than the violence and we can imply what happened from the clues. Great job! Looking forward to your next story.

Great ending, I'm glad the ministry didn't get away with anything. I must say though, during the sex scene it is a bit hard to picture exactly how their bodies are positioned. It could go either way some times, with Harry either facing Draco or the two of them being back to chest. I would try to be just a bit more clear in that, it can be distracting at times. Also you think for such a rich vampire Draco would have a bloody bedroom. If not for himself at least now for Harry. I can't imagine sex being remotely comfortable on a hard marble floor, even with Harry on top of Malfoy. Regardless I enjoyed this story immensely. I can't wait for the next chapters of Parsimony and Sanctom Sanctorum. Keep up the good work.

T_T its over.... T_T but it was an amazing ending and i can only hope that you write more stories in the future, as i will read and follow them, your an amazing writer and i'm sad this story's over.
Loved the ending though, amazing.
Thank you for the story
Kit

I must admit to having gone of your fic's for a while , Ashborn left me nonplussed, how ever , WOWSER this one rocked, your Harry and Draco have always been so deep in character, even for one of your shorter fics : ) thank you for this and I will happily read anything else you have to post for us all .

It's almost like Christmas!

A very nice one-shot and the last chapter of business meeting on one day!

Thank you for sharing this story and I'm glad Ron and Hermione are not completely out of the picture for Harry.

cheers

I was wrong AND right. har and draco aren't just good together... no, they're brillient. It's going to take the Ministry a LONG time to get over this and the lesson was pounded home with a mallet. do NOT mess with a Malfoy fang Wizard or his very powerful partner.

about the end...

Well now, that's a good way to end it nicely. Though
fo' sho' I thought you were doing a part 2, but it's
all good. :-)

I really liked how it was just the two of them as the focus
of the story, without trying to add drama or other characters
into the mix.

You should do it more. Seriously.

Fantastic story. Very nicely done.

I've read your work for a long time; used to read it on livejournal and recently picked this story up here (not due to a change in your writing, but because I didn't have the time to dedicate to your amazingly lengthy and huge portfolio of work!) I love the short chapters and how business meetings can seems so intensely action packed.

Quick question that is driving me NUTS: is Harry facing away from Draco during the frotting/drinking of blood, or facing toward him? He leans forward as if by gravity and looks towards Draco who is front of him, but then looks over his shoulder and Draco comes against his arse. Additionally, they kiss post-orgasm. Does Harry turn around after Draco appearing, and then turn back for a kiss/to be carried? Or is it something else? I have no idea why this is driving me so crazy trying to figure out, but it is. I'm a spatial visualization person I guess?

Thanks for clearing up my rather odd confusion. ><'