rate_review Reviews

I am loving the premise of this story!!!!

So creative and well written.

Thanks for all the hard work!

OMFG! Total cliffie on chapter 5! Must we beg to read more deliciousness. Just say the words and I am on my knees.

Oh, how I have missed you!!!!

More, please! You know how to write a dominate Lucius, as he can only be.

Oh, how I wish I were in Astoria's place *MOAN*.

Oh, for the love of god! That was... very satisfying. Thanks, now I need a cigarette.

Alright, you have me hooked! And I don't even like this pairing!

You did such a good job in developing the characters (especially Lucius, he is such a bastard lol). I can't wait to see what happens next.

I hope Draco doesn't find out about his wife fucking his father--that would crush him more than finding out that he can't have children. To him, it would be a blow to his pride that his father even had to fix the problem of not having a heir. *shakes head* And the drama begins.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Much Love
Koolgirl18

Very interesting first two chapters. I do think Astoria gave into the passion too soon, but I am enjoying this. Lucius is an evil, manipulative prick. Astoria a sweet girl hopelessly in love. And poor Draco, finally a man grown stronger, but still damaged from all he's been through. I do have to agree with Lucius and look forward to the moment when Astoria finally realizes how far this deception will have to go.

This could be going somewhere wonderfully salacious. I'm interested to see what the second chapter holds. The Greengrass girls are such liminal characters in canon that they can be expanded so very well within fanon.