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by AnyaToile

schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You think there will be 45-50 chapters of this story? WOOO HOOOOO! That is fabulous news! I am so very happy to have stumbled upon your story. I cannot wait to hear about some of the more barbaric disaplin methods Hermione finds. Oh and detention tonight. YIppeee!
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its nice to know the Malfoy name has lost a bit of shine in this post voldy world. I wonder if Severus will invite his old friend over for a drink about 9pm tonight? Does Lucius like to watch?
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You and your teasing about smut and then NOTHING! Why do you torment the fangirls like this? Why?

I am all sorts of curious about what Hermione found in the detention book. Although I must confess to wonder why she thinks its going to make any difference at all?
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG he has got her! She gave permisson! Sneaky Snape! I am so glad the next chapter is up. Don't know if I could have made it through at such an evil chapter break>>>
schedule November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Eight more days of "treatments" Woot! I am so ready for Hermione to tell Prof Snape that she enjoys them. Whatever will he say in the face of this brash revelation? I cannot wait to find out!
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GAWD HOw long is he going to make her wait on the toliet? I am so into this story I am having sympathy cramps!
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice
person alina290
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update. Real life can be bitch at times. I hope your project went well. Poor Hermione. I feel so bad for her. Severus is a man that can never really be read or understood at times. He seems to have had a very hard life here. My only hope is that he doesn't take it too far and then regret his actions. One questions, is he enjoying what he is doing to her? I know that it's to help her, but still.

Liz
person Whitlock
schedule October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
When will this story be updated? Last week there was an AN listed as ch 14 saying that there would be an update Sunday ( which would have been the 16th). Then that note was deleted.
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good so far, but two minor things bug me - one, why does Hermione keep falling on her arse? Does she have Vertigo? Normal people just get off balance for a moment when they stumble, not fall. Second was when you wrote that she put quills(plural) and her wand in her hair. Wands are around a foot long, so don't you think she'd look really weird with it sticking out? Quills are short,not as weird looking. Why did she hang up the enema bottle? You mean, it doesn't embarrass her? It would embarrass me! I'd keep it in the damn box until I absolutely HAD to use it.