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Another lovely chapter, I was a little bit disappointed to find out Lucius wouldn't be involved with Hermione's detentions. (I love Lucius/Hermione/Severus fics) That being said I'm very excited and can't wait to find out who your third person is going to be, for some strange reason I have a feeling it's going to be Remus...If that's the case I look forward to see how you tie it in with his family. Xx

That's our Head Girl, no body messes with her. Thank you for this chapter. I am sure Severus did that on purpose so he would make it seem like it was her fault she had to go see him. In reality he is helping her so no one will find out about her problem.

Liz

Poor Hermione is so confused! Hopefully she'll have a nice conversation with Severus and he'll get her head screwed on straight. Even if all the rest of the screwing going on is kinky =P

Nice chapter, poor Dean. Is Hermione just not interested in him, does she have a feeling like she'd be cheating on Severus or is she just so embarrassed and confused about what is going on that she doesn't know how to handle anything? Poor thing.

Over all, nice chapter. Oh, I am not a fan of Sirius and Remus being dead, personally. Bring them back, make it AU and have them not be dead - it's all okay by me. The more sexy men around the merrier as far as I'm concerned.

The portraits sure like to taunt the students. Good chapter. Nice of Hermione to clean her room. I look forward to the next chapter.

Liz

Oops! I can't believe that I forgot that - I couldn't actually remember her calling him Dean but it was the only Thomas that I could think of, lol.

Go Hermione! Nice to see her getting some of her own back. Poor thing has been so down on herself the last few chaps it's good to see that she hasn't completely lost sight of herself. Hopefully being sexually submissive is something she will just incorporate into the rest of what she sees as her 'self' and learn it is not something to be ashamed of and doesn't make her 'bad'.

LOL, I'm sure she's safe on the house elf front - either they get through her things quickly or have seen it all before. But don't we all assume that what is happening to us is important to everyone around us? You're right - I never thought of enema's as sexy, but now...grr! May have to give them a try - so deliciously dirty.

Glad to see that Hermione enjoyed her first treatment. Will we find out if she actually needed all eight days or if Severus is just enjoying playing with her and/or became irritated with her and is continuing to punish her?

Looking forward to the next chapter, I swear you have me refreshing this page so often it would be broken if it were anything other than a webpage!

I am in love with this story so far for a number of reasons. Yes, I am able to spot some typos, grammar missteps, and the like but it seems to me that this story is going to be far more important than that. I love that Hermione doesn't fully understand her feelings at this point, especially since we have just ended the first encounter; that really rings true to me. I also really enjoyed Snape's characterization, both how he pushed her right to the edge through challenging her and even taunting her, and also how there were tiny glimpses that there may be a side of him that is (slightly) softer. I love Snape as a Dominant so far, although I did wonder why he allowed Hermione to leave without having that discussion about what was going on that he had mentioned to her. I was really wondering why he would leave her without double checking to make sure she was okay, despite the fact that he isn't always pleasant. I have my own views about what a good Dominant should be, obviously, and each relationship is different, however I'm really hoping that if this story is developing in that direction that your Snape is the kind of Dom that doesn't just play with his sub, but rather takes the time to cultivate trust and a relationship. Excellent start so far, and I really can't wait to read more.

I must admit that I am eager for the confrontation between Hermione and Severus although I have the feeling that he will control that aspect between them as much as any other and Hermione will not get what she thinks that she wants out of it.

Looking forward to your next chapter in a few days then! =)

This story is different... But in a good way. Not normally what I read but I actually think Sev is hot in just about any situation lol good job!

I guess she just came to the realization that she gets turned on by being humiliated. Good work, thank you for this chapter.

Liz