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for The Story of H

by AnyaToile

schedule September 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I really hate when ppl abandon great stories.  It makes me as mad when as when tv shows go and just stop after ppl get vested. To the point I don't even bother watching new tv shows because they waste time,  energy,  and emotion to just stop partway through.  I feel it's gotten worse lately ,like idiots in hollywood are just using viewers as testing grounds and when they can't get rich enough they pull the plug. So I just refuse to watch anything now that is a series or sequel. 

 

That said I wish u would finish this but I understand you are a published author now in which case please find away to put this in a place for "orphaned" stories so someone can pick it up. We really need a section for those because it happens too often 

person Anonumouse
schedule September 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Please keep it going!  I'm loving it!

person MzPearlz
schedule April 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
T.T I do want the smut... but what is going to happen with Thomas?! Oh please please update :(
person Miranda
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you finish this story. It's.really good so far.
person Jessie Deal
schedule August 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is getting to be a good story. Too bad it seems like you've given up on it.
Thank you for all that you did write and perhaps you'll get back to this - or another story.
schedule April 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm normally all Dramione...but I decided to switch it up and look around and stumbled across this little gem. I read it all in one sitting and thought about it all night. Not many stories do that to me anymore. I know it's been a while since you updated, but I sincerely do hope you continue this story...It is different and well written and I want to read more.
person RookSeer82
schedule March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lovely start....i read all 17 chapters in one sitting....lol. snape mentioned that he wanted to get back at the person that saved him, was that Hermione?
schedule January 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!! Please continue this story!!!! I have never been one much for stories involving things like enemas, but the way you write it, it's incredibly erotic... In an embarrassing, but hot sort of way. I love the way you have written Snape. It is how I always pictured him behaving toward our favorite bookworm. And correct me if I am wrong but it seems like in the last chapter he realized he didn't want her to feel overwhelmingly ashamed of her enjoyment... Either that or his telling her she could clean up and use the cream to soothe herself was a reward for admitting it. I anticipate this story continuing (or at least hope strongly that it will.)
schedule January 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So I read this about a year ago and loved it, just rediscovered it! It's been quite a while since your last update and a shame that we probably won't see any more chapters, really enjoyable read.
person snapefan1983
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
tell me, is chapter 17 the last chapter? or will there be more to this story than that??