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October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
whoa, did my review do that, or did you already have that in mind? Lol.
At any rate I'm glad Har's willing to let his instincts lead... now all he's got to do is convince the damned things that there's a time and a place.
Is the change in wing colour really significant? It feels like it will be.
At any rate I'm glad Har's willing to let his instincts lead... now all he's got to do is convince the damned things that there's a time and a place.
Is the change in wing colour really significant? It feels like it will be.
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thats find do not worry! lol*S* I love thsi fic and lookforward to more when you can....
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lucky to get it at all , neh?
i din know this was gonna be a creature fic. Can;t wait to find out what har is.
Winces. poor Mio.
At any rate, looking forward to more... computers co operating. >>
i din know this was gonna be a creature fic. Can;t wait to find out what har is.
Winces. poor Mio.
At any rate, looking forward to more... computers co operating. >>
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, the longer the better is my opinion. lol
Interesting start.
Can't wait to see where you go from here, maybe a little more explanation/backstory?
Just my opinion, but switching to first person in the flashback was a bit awkward.
Interesting start.
Can't wait to see where you go from here, maybe a little more explanation/backstory?
Just my opinion, but switching to first person in the flashback was a bit awkward.
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is good length wise if you want to make them longer thats good too... *S* I love this story so far... More please see you tomarrow...
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The length is much better, if you can keep writing chapters of that length every day that'd be great! I like the creature twist that you've thrown in!
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, that answers most of my previous Q's. :D
Length wise, write as much or little as you are comfy with. I think it's apretty decent length atm. Maybe a little bit long, still, it depends on how the chappie comes together neh?
Length wise, write as much or little as you are comfy with. I think it's apretty decent length atm. Maybe a little bit long, still, it depends on how the chappie comes together neh?
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October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good Start. I will continue reading it. A little word of advice for you though, this type of story has been done before so if you are going to continue with it try to make it as original as possible.
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October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor harry I hope they kill vernon
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October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on your first story! It's a great beginning. I hope the next chapter is a bit longer though! I was just starting to get into the chapter when it ended lol. Update soon please!