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for Disillusioned

by Remarkable

person A
schedule May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it and want to read more! Dirty old man indeed. . .give me more!!!
5 stars!!!!!
person Aleria18
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, very well written. I do hope you are going to continue this. I would be eager to read more. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
person Brittany
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH... MY... GAWD!!!!!!!!!!
*splashes herself with cold water*
That was AMAZING..... I've also read you updates to your 'Woman Series', loving those as well, and loved your other little one shot stories that you posted..... But this was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
You seem to excell in the threesomes/moresomes catergory, and after you 'woman series' this is my favorite, and I absolutely cannot wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!
person kylanSB
schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey i was wondering is the "women series" discontinued? i really hope not :( anyway great story. 5+
schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was even better than the first chapter. Just need a couple moments to coold down here.


Hm, erm, yeah(fans self rapidly).


I love Remus - I really love these three together, but they haven't been done to death. So I'm looking forward to seeing what else you have planned.
schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This si great I'm looking forward to the next update