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October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh YES!
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October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I simply love it!
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October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
To be palatable is to be tasty and appealing. You are calling something maggot infested and palatable. One wonders at the quirks of your palate. This is the first line of the story. UNpalatable is what you mean.
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October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story. I'm starting to get a better idea of what is going on and I like the direction you're taking.
Severus is my favorite, so my vote will always be him.
But really, I could easily see them all running up after her. Or perhaps Lucius since they'd just had that small confrontation - must be hard to be seen by someone who had probably been fond of you as a rapist. Poor Lucius, he's obviously a good guy in this world and now he's being confronted with evidence that he has in himself to be so evil. Ah, well, I'm pretty sure that part is just a side bit, lol, but that interaction within the self has always sort of fascinated me a bit. I think it's why Severus is my favorite character - in all of HP he's the only one that realized he could be more than he was and went about doing something to change that. And your fic is a really great way to shine a light on that - how easy it is to make the 'wrong' choice.
LOL, anyhow, great chapter and looking forward to the next one!
Severus is my favorite, so my vote will always be him.
But really, I could easily see them all running up after her. Or perhaps Lucius since they'd just had that small confrontation - must be hard to be seen by someone who had probably been fond of you as a rapist. Poor Lucius, he's obviously a good guy in this world and now he's being confronted with evidence that he has in himself to be so evil. Ah, well, I'm pretty sure that part is just a side bit, lol, but that interaction within the self has always sort of fascinated me a bit. I think it's why Severus is my favorite character - in all of HP he's the only one that realized he could be more than he was and went about doing something to change that. And your fic is a really great way to shine a light on that - how easy it is to make the 'wrong' choice.
LOL, anyhow, great chapter and looking forward to the next one!
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October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ive got an idea, on who goes after her...how about none of the above and Lucius does!!!
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
different, are ron and hermoine going to be good friends in this story.
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying the story so far. I cant wait to see where you take it. i want to know more about this new world. How did Lucius escape being a death eater? also she should lift the memory modification off Remus and Severus so they will remember her now.
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yummy! I love how this fic is turning out and can't wait for more.
Hmm, Remus, Severus and more oh my! I'm hoping for Lucius but I'm open, lol. I can't wait to see how these three/four come together.
Hmm, Remus, Severus and more oh my! I'm hoping for Lucius but I'm open, lol. I can't wait to see how these three/four come together.
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October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy ...... More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. After ready this chapter, I'm very intrigued. I look forward to learning the answers to the questions Hermione wondered about.