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by Suziesu74

schedule November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow *nose bleed, body falls to floor*
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting profecy. Sounds like Harry and Severus but you never know. Hope more is to come soon.
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh dear, as if one prophesy didn't mess things up enough... ah well, at least they got draco back.
person Rosealynne
schedule November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sev. Very HHHHHHOOOOOTTTTTT action. Had to stop my self from squeeling(to loudly :D) like a fangirl lol i cant wait for u to update again(all ur stories stalker2, pandora etc) with ur stories being well written and HHHHHHHOOOOOOOTTTTTTT i... Errr ..oops i mean we ur fans can reread them over and over again and never get bored... I agree(with unneeded i think who said it) LM/RL would be really cute couple. Poor LM he never gets a break in this chap i hope dracos ok( me goes to my bedroom and cks on a naked draco tied to my bed :) yup hes super fine lol) keep up the AWESOME job
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great story.
xxx
remus and lucius would be sooo cute together.
xx
I hope dracos OK.
Lucius is so sweet. just right i think.
xx
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Draco! What did he do or what was he thinking? Hope he wasn't taken. Update again soon please.
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh... my... the melodrama of it all. Seriously, i swear, this is better than day time tv. Your timing as as impeccable as theirs is dreadful. this is great, there's going to be sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much explaining to dooooooooooooo. ^^
And the scene between Sev and Har... nose bleed. I'm glad he reassured Sev. He's taken so much emotional battering. Having Har reject him would have broken him for sure.
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow there's gonna be some gossip going on. And Draco showed up. Is he okay or was it just a dream? Update again soon please.
schedule November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so good! please email me at angelicsheila1978@yahoo.com when you update i love the whole spy lucius thing btw i always wanted to think that deep down he was really good all along lol
schedule October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love that in the first chapter you thought this would be 2-3 chapters lol I love the story and eagerly await each update. I am so glad you decided to keep with it!