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for Wrong time, right place

by Suziesu74

schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10:

Poor Harry! He is quite insecure! But then he is also very young!
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
citrus fruits everywhere. ^^ *starts squeezing the juice for later sale.
Maybe har can scare this Luc's snake brand into behaving too.
reading back over this story all i can think is 'wow, this is all happening so fast!'
No wonder Har's friends are a bit thrown out. I'm not saying ron isn't being a dick... just that it's understandable they're all a bit discomfited.
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11:

That was very exciting!
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12

Ah! Drama and Action! Lovely!
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1:

Oh! That is so promising!
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

Delicious! Btw I am here via wonderlucks's Bottom!Snape list on IJ!
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3:

Reviewing each chapter is also a nice way of savouring yummy fics! otherwise I might get too greedy ;)

I like how you managed to turn the atmosphere from dirty and sexy to emotional in the last bit!
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4:

Oh! This one was for the heart! So sweet! (And the kinky end! Yay! ;)
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5:

I think I need a shower after the hotness of this chapter :D

schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
congrats. despite reading the chappie three times I'm confused, bemused and bewildered. "welcome to the family?" wt...
Wow, those vamps move hella quick. Ah well, at least Draco will have a hell of a ride for his first?
Whoa new prophesy huh? Is the old one still in play or does this cancel out that?