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for Wrong time, right place

by Suziesu74

schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*winces. wow, bad choice of hubby, and how!
Well, if this doesn't work, at least Luc will be well taken care of as a fang.
Is it just me or does this seem to be happening very quickly?
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17:

Oh, I love the sex! It's s intense and in a way I can see Harry and Severus being very passionate and greedy! Also Severus would be jealous! He's so possessive!
schedule November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16:

So many new developments,so many emotions! Harry sure has away of announcing his relationship with Severus!
schedule November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15:

Harry and Severus having sex while Lucius is in the room right next to them was delicious! Very naughty ;) I have odd reactions about Severus' breakdown: On one side I feel it's slightly OOC, but then for some reasons I adore vulnerable, emotionally open Severus, canon or not! The Tennyson quote was very beautiful!
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13:

Oh Lucius! How nice! And a very sweet chapter ending, with cute confessions :)
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

Although I know that "Good!Lucius" is firmly in fanon I still like fics in which he's a spy for the Order ;)
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6:

Filthy + Hot = Perfect ;)
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7:

I can imagine Harry getting jealous at his own fantasy alter ego and desperate in his yearning! The fact that Severus seems to be an angry, demanding bottom is also nice here!
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8:

Ah! I can see that some find your Severus a bit OOC
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: