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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gosh. PLEASE tell me Severus didn't go to them. Oh Please. Harrys' going to have a heart attack. Update again soon please.
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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg...why has Amelia gone to him! It is her isn't it? Stupid Remus and lucius pushed her to leave :( update now!!!!!!
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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
stupid, stupid wench. really what was she thinking... oh right, she wasn;t.
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January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very intense vision/memory scene and very well written. Thank you ever so much for the breaks between scenes, made it flow much easier for me. Glad you updated, and now I'll await your next chapter.
Leania
Leania
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January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Tears for Harry. Tears for Amelie. Joy for Draco. Hope for Dumbles and Sev. Death to Riddle and Alexander. Pinned to a wall and left to die for Beatrix. That is my thought for the day
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January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I never saw Amelia offering Dumbles a chance at Immortality. Well done. I did however see Tonks side over to Voldemort, but hat's about it. I say well done on this story and please do continue. (I also don't see how you get inspiration for multiple sexual encounters between all the pairings, but I admit to jealousy.) Everything looks good on both the grammatical and puntualtional fronts, but if I could suggest throwing in a wrench into the plot like a major character death or capture. Just a suggestion hat you could take or leave. :)
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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Harry is very protective of what he considers his
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, someone's not going to wake up happy! I quite enjoyed this chapter, however the "bouncing" between scenes can get a bit confusing. Perhaps using some type of symbol ( ~ ~ ~ ~, ****) to alert one to a scene change to another pair (or set) of characters will keep someone like me from having to re-read the first few sentences after understanding that the scene changed.
That's my only suggestion, I'm waiting for your next chapter rubbing my hands together and smirking with glee.
Leania
That's my only suggestion, I'm waiting for your next chapter rubbing my hands together and smirking with glee.
Leania
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yeah, big surprise there. couldn;t happen to a stupider chick.
curios, i wonder why he's angling for sev. Sev's not pretty but he is compelling. Is it just to piss har off, cause if so, its working a treat.
curios, i wonder why he's angling for sev. Sev's not pretty but he is compelling. Is it just to piss har off, cause if so, its working a treat.
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December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, just wow! so much for a simple snarry pwp huh? lmfao it was hot and intense to start adn the further you've gone with this, the better it's gotten. i love the two new relationships that have formed and sev and harry fucking like bunnies is just hot, and don't forget, harry said sev gets to top sometime too ;) great job with this, keep up the good work :D