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for Wrong time, right place

by Suziesu74

schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very nicely done, another wonderful chapter :)
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your portrayal of Severus in this story, and I can't wait to read more. You added a bit of breathplay, and i love you for that.
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok so now it has become a reality. Sweet. Thank you for the quick update I hope more is to come soon.

Funny how when Harry thrusted in he didn't know it was actually Harry. Or did he? Either I'm right on the button or I'm just tired...

Oh well great fic anyways.

MD
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
god those two are having a time of it lol but it sounds like they're finally starting to get somewhere now. good job, hot and angsty and emotional
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, gives a whole new meaning to the words it's all in your head, huh.
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sooo..... Severus does want him though... Right? Either he does or he is gonna kill Harry...great story so far.
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
whoa that is some nerve. Harry is a lot braver then I am. I would've bolted. I am anxious to see what happens next so please update soon, and thank you for the update.
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww, poor harry, but he's trying to do right by sev, and maybe those two will finally work out there issues...after a little more sex lol good job, keep it up :)
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so hot. I love your stories and can't wait for this one to continue!!!
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow I think I might die from a nose bleed. thank you for that hawt update. Loved it! HOpe more is to come soon please