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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:) You're doing very well on this, though you do indeed need a beta. Email me and I'd be happy to look over your work and correct it for you.
^^ I'm not normally a m/f reader, but I like this idea a lot. Jaime seems really sweet and I look forward to reading more. :)
Keep up the good work.
^^ I'm not normally a m/f reader, but I like this idea a lot. Jaime seems really sweet and I look forward to reading more. :)
Keep up the good work.
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October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! If You continue, I'll be you fanatically loyal follower!! I want to continue reading this story so bad!! :D
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September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So far it's a good start. I'm enjoying the characterization of Jaime so far, and look forward to seeing more.
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September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it is quite a lovely start. I do have questions though, I know you wrote that Blaise does not want to have children but how does she know did she ask him? Why school? Let me tell you it is difficult having a toddler and going to school not to mention pregnant. Could you describe how you pictured Jamie or does she look like a female version of Harry? You mentioned Draco, is he going to know about the pregnancy and if he does is he going to tell Blaise? Does Blaise know? I like the pairing but again what about Blaise I mean he is the father of the child?
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September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dont get me wrong I like the stories Plot/idea so far but I think this story could have worked with Male-harry and M-preg. But in saying that i am still looking forward to reading this story.
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September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Death Master? Reapers? What r those? I like it over all. But I feel like this is a new character altogether. If u hadn't said that Jamie was harry I would think u were putting in ur own character. Are u going to pair up Jamie/harry with Edward and Jacob?
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September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i thnk the pairing rocks...i cant wait to see what drama will come out of it
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September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
want to see more and to let you know in the first Chapter you have Luna write about the "Poor Boy-Who-Lived" you will need to change that part so people don't have to ask if Harry(Jamie) is a girl. other then that keep it up.
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September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, this looks really good!! I can't wait for more. But I'm not excited about Edward. I love him with Bella. Anyway can't wait for more. How come this is under femslash
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September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I would love to read more. Can't wait until you update.