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for Bringing Him Back

by shsa0702

person Sharp1
schedule October 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hi... I've been reading some of your stuff... Really Really liking this... It looks like you abandoned it? 

I've reviewed another of your pics... Your writing is very careful, detailed and thorough... Unlike so much I've found here. I'm a very discriminating reader, lol. Above all, your erotic sense and style is stirring and turns me on, dammit! Lol

 

Come back and make me harder ;-)

person Peahen
schedule June 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Wow.  I am so sad this story appears to be abandoned.  It is creative and intriguing.  I really wish I knew how it turned out.  I hate thinking of the tragic fate Severus has been left to....

person Amanda
schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, on the fourth chapter when I saw the note. I write too so I get what your saying. I don't have much constructive crisicm for you but I can tell you that I am enjoying your story thus far, and the way that you explore the characters =)
person Chester
schedule December 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot - hope u continue it.
person Elle
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story. If you tame it down a little, you could post it on fanfiction dot net, and get many more reviews- since your bowl is so empty. You have a wonderfully original idea- would love to see where it goes.
person MatetRox
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
fantastic plot...is this. finished?
person SaintMungo
schedule June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am a huge fan of SS/HG, and am really enjoying your story! I hope you continue on with it, because the idea is extremely fascinating and I am looking forward to seeing where it goes from here.
person TrueBlackRoses
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I seriously doubt Harry and Hermione would let him be convicted, it's too OoC for them, and I doubt Hermione would ever be so clueless of his fate. But this having been said, it's a good story and I hope you'll continue it 'cause it can be great. I'm looking forward for the next chapter
person MIverson
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I soo hope you plan to write more of this. It looks awesome. Can't wait to read more.

Cosmyk
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Eh.... I doubt that Hermione or Harry would have allowed that to happen to Snape. Story is good but the premise is just a little too 'out there' for me.

I personally think that if the ministry had tried that, they would have found themselves overthrown and tossed through the Veil themselves.