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for The Diary - Re-edited

by Suziesu74

person delia cerrano
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holey Moley Batman!!! Talk about cliffhangers...mysteries...twists & turns! Where's the next chapter? It has to be here
soon, very soon. The public wants to know...now. Explanations before my brain bursts please.
person Talltree-san
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*GASPS* I did not see that coming at all! Thank you for this enlightening chappie :) !
person theednamo
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is sooo good, I can't wait for you to continue the story!!! Please update because it really greay!!!
person koki
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, what a bastard Snape is!!

Did Melody cheat on Remus or did she run to him when Snape told her he didn't love her?

All this people going put with someone who fucked someone who had a relationship back when, is pretty confusing.

and who the hell is Rhymes?

I hate WIPs for this reason,
person Talltree-san
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was Snape all along?! Wow never saw that coming! Also I feel bad about what happened to Melody and Daniel...poor little Daniel, but he's with his momma in heaven :(.
schedule May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly!!!! What happened? Seems she was involved with a professor. Yet she married Remus. Who claims he's always loved Sirius. Soooooo need more!!!
person Talltree-san
schedule March 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, and thus the tension rises to epic proportion! But that would be really sucky for a bride to die on her wedding day talk about extreme bad luck :(.
person Talltree-san
schedule March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uh...the image of Snape in thongs is quite horrific DX! Though I wonder what the dealy-o is with Rhyme and Harry's brief encounter is all about?
schedule March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
whoo hoo this was steamy... you do an erotic draco/harry to perfection. Love love love this :)
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Fabulous!
Proof that I was right, and an author can write a good lemon without following some contrived script.
I loved this and will follow you to your conclusion, in more ways than one ;)