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for The Diary - Re-edited

by Suziesu74

person cassandra
schedule March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story. R u going to complete the story as I would love to see what happenz
person staar
schedule January 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this before and stopped ...but just finished all of it and PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON !!!!!!!!!!!! this is so good !!!!!!!
person delia cerrano
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow quite the story! I hope you intend to finish it? And what's the significanse of the snake necklace Harry wears that he got from the diary box? In this story I like Sirius/Remus and Lucius/Severus and of course Draco/Harry. I'm so glad you see Dumbledore like I do a manipulative evil man that has or had everyone fooled.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!! Intense! What is she and what is her connection to Harry or is the necklace the only thing? If Daniel was Severus' son then why is she in love with Remus? And Lucius? Is everyone crazy about her even now that she is evil? At least Harry's & maybe Molly's eyes have been opened to how evil Dumbledore is.
person ChaosLady
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was disturbing. The rest of the chapters were hot!
schedule December 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you come back to this. It pulled me so fast I really want to know what happens.
person megaphone
schedule August 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Asdfghjkl... The lemons in this story are so good! I honestly can't bring myself to care about the plot, though. It's well written and whatnot, but for some reason it doesn't capture my imagination. Still a great read, though.
schedule August 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
very well written i enjoy it and that it seems to have actual plot more please and thank you!
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really cant wait for more. so many twists and turns i love it!
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More! Please? lol