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Ooh, quite a delicious chapter, especially with fisting (a personal fave!) and written so nicely too. I wonder exactly how sore Draco will be in the morning ;). The idea of Draco with Bill Weasley for a steampunk fic sounds delicious -- either Bill or Charlie Weasley makes for a good pairing, as do the Twins. So many choices and so many potential kinks. I look forward to anything and everything you write. Keep up the great work.

awww, poor draco, it's all so hot and i still can't help feeling sorry for him lol. i really hoep he figures out what's happened to him. loved the idea with the toy responding to key phrases, that day must have seemed completley endless and then he gets back to the common room just to have another train run on him, and didn't even get to enjoy most of it. keep up the good work :)

I found your latest chapter to be very hot and I'm very curious to see where this is going.

poor draco, but at least he has goyle kinda looking out for him. still can't wait to find out what caused it lol. keep up the good work :)

You wrote a het chapter!!! Sex, smutty het!!! :) Holy hell, Draco as Olivia was hot! A new experience for him, new sensations, new pleasures....yummy!

I've thought before about Harry and Ginny taking polyjuice of each other to switch places, so this chapter was really fascinating to me. I can't wait for more. More of all your stories actually, I would still like to see more in the Ginny's punishment, I left you a review over there ;)

Don't take this personally, I make this comment whenever I come across a mention of this in any story, because it's such a wide-spread myth that many take for fact. You didn't go into it in detail, but for others reading the reviews of this story it might help: women do not have hymens. There is nothing that gets "ripped through" inside a woman. THe hymen is a membrane on the OUTSIDE of the vagina, along the lower part, often shaped like a cresent moon. This stretches naturally with age and even some women who have given birth can have remains of the hymen left. As it looks different for everybodu, it's impossible to tell if a woman have had sex from studying the hymen, still, as many people still believe inthe hymen-myth, some women have then surgecally "restored" just to make sure that they bleed on their wedding night. In fact, some have gotten hte advice to cut themselves "down there" to make sure that there is blood... and blood during intercorse is NOT a sign that you are a virging, actually, if you are wet enough (use enough lube) and the partner is careful you should never bleed unless you, perhaps are one of the few people whose hymen actually covers quite a bit of the vaginal opening, but that's rare...
As I said, this in not critiqe for this story or you ar a writer, I'm only trying to spread the word as so many women actross the world suffer from this myth, and therefore it should never be included in fiction eiter... but it's so widly spread it occurs in books and tv-shows as well, I'm afraid... so fight the hymen-myth! ;)

awww, poor draco, something nasty really does need to happen to flint lol afraid, but can't wait, to see what happens to the poor boy next

another wonderful chapter, he really needs to find some nicer people though, poor guy lol keep up the good work :)

Wow! hot hot hot So is Harry going to get his hands on Draco? What would the twins (Fred and George) do to a horny, slutty Draco? *giggles* Patiently, or not so patiently, waiting to see if we get more.