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by lilith395

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schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very intense story and suspect some spousal abuse in there. Great story and insight and yes though a one shot you can flesh this out and put in a background leading up to the day. Great story and I enjoyed it.

Mare
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story! True, it could have been flushed out more, but if this is what works for you, great. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.