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For English not being your first language... this is pretty damn impressive. Kudos. I'd never have guessed.
wow, i know snape is still kinda pissed at him but that's one heck of a rough approach. Talk about dropped in at the deep end. gonna be a while before Harry is calm about this, betcha.

That was... AWESOME! If I had someone speak to me like Snape did to Harry, I am sure I would be in no better condition than our poor hero :D Gosh, D/s always turned me on - just how I find a man like Snape in real life? ; ) Your English is really good - I too am doing a major in English Philology at a college. I've already finished my first year and am impatiently awaiting the second which starts on the 1st of October (3rd this year). People like you, foreigners who decide to write in English, always have my respect for actuially trying (regardless of the end result). Gosh, I think I'll start my own story, if only for the sake of improving my English, heh.

Take care

- SinfulMind

PS. I gather that Snape's father fucked prettily with he's son's head and perhaps now Snape longs for control which was once taken from him by his father? Whatever the reason - this Snape is fucking hot! :D

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It's getting better and better :D Are they going to that club again? And is the clothing as revealing as I think it is? *winks* Thank you for another chapter :)

So hot it's burning my eyes.

A very good chapter. I love the ending, with the aftercare. Very nice.

You ARE evil! haha. Don't worry, these chapters are totally hot. I love seeing how Harry learns about Severus' kinks, and how he's coming to realize that there is a lot more to the man than his prickly exterior. Thanks for updating so often! I get so excited when I check for a new chapter and see that I have four to read. :) Can't wait for the next update!

:) I love you for the quick updates! I just hope you won't abandon the story like many authors do - one of the reasons why I don't like to read WIPs.

I didn't know that English is not your first language - it's not mine either. I even contemplated to write a story myself but I am not a writer material - I tend to be impatient with details and give up very quickly. Though such an attempt at my own fic would likely help mi not only with my English but with writing in general. I have to think more about it.

I like the last chapter. Seems like Draco is not staying in Snape's bedroom after all! That should be a consolation for Harry, who is jelous, poor guy :D

Can't wait for the next time they have intercourse :D Yeah, I am noughty, but rightly so in my age :D

Take care!

I'm not sure what is going on with me - I've never liked slash before, but I read a story with a mix of het and slash and well, it was kind of hot. So, here I am reading a full-on slash and it's also, er, hot. Actually, I think pretty much anything with dominating Snape is pretty darn sexy. This story is well written and I'm liking it so far. I thought the details regarding the bond were a bit sketchy - but this is Harry, not Hermione, and he's not into digging into things, he's more of a play by the seat of the pants type. So, that seems to be in character if nothing else.

But you are an evil author to leave us on that cliffhanger! Evil, evil, evil! Hopefully we get a new chappie soon and you can redeem yourself! LOL. Keep up the good work, looking forward to see what Snape's answer will be.

Loving this story!!! Although I love all your stories, so no surprise there. Sorry I don

Aah cliff hanger! I really love how this story's going. :) And you update so quickly! This is rapidly becoming my favorite WIP. Can't wait for the next chapter!