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for Control

by estherkolbe

schedule September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are updating too quickly? Never! I look for updates with this story about a hundred times a day! I got an account just so I could review it lol... But just figured out that I wasn't signed in until today. Anyways, great job! I like the dominant/submissive aspect in Sev and Harry's relationship. Keep up the good work!
person Nikte
schedule September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No bondage today ;( Anyway, I was starting to wonder when will Severus start "training" Harry, and it's so funny he is so in character, I mean it is so tipical of him to expect Harry to know exactly what he is supposed to do with out explaining first, it
person magentah
schedule September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Eeee so cute! That was so good for both of them, I think. Harry's not the type to bow down immediately and get it right from the start. I mean, hell, he doesn't even really know what he's supposed to be doing. Severus has been fantastically patient, and I can't blame him for not having too much patience left at the same time. I can't wait for the next chapter! Also really curious about what Harry's outfit looks like. :)
person magentah
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I just wrote a GIANT review and AFF ate it. Ugh. To summarize: you are AWESOME and pervy in such wonderful ways, I am loving the plot as well as the smut, and I think you should keep writing this story forever. Really. Sorry I didn't write it out in better detail like the original review I tried to leave! Thanks so much for sharing your fantastic ideas for our favorite boys with us. :D
person magentah
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, also: Cliffhanger! Gah!
person Nikte
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG I
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
they are so cute together and i like your fluffy bunny its just fluffy enough! thanks for the great chapters!
Kit
person Nikte
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yup that's me. *lurk lurk, stalkity stalk stalk. << >> << ...and you're welcome. ^^
For English not being your first language... this is pretty damn impressive. Kudos. I'd never have guessed.
wow, i know snape is still kinda pissed at him but that's one heck of a rough approach. Talk about dropped in at the deep end. gonna be a while before Harry is calm about this, betcha.
sorry, review thing is being a bitch.
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sorry, review thing is being a bitch.