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for Control

by estherkolbe

schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh! You left an intense cliffie there! Shame on you! Lol... But it was pretty hot. I am so jealous of Harry because he has Sev at his fingertips... Lol
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaa! I've been away for a while and just look at this... so many new chapters!!!!!!!! Huraaaaa!

I love your Smut and the Sverus you portray in this fic. Harry is finally coming to accept his role as a sub and doesn't question everything, good. And this thing with Tobias Snape... is he really alive or is is some sort of a joke on his part left for Severus to find? Some perservation charms? Watever it is, I think we will hear more of Snape Senior in the future yet. It is apparent he is the main plot holder in your head :D

Last but not least, I am very impressive with the ease you seem to write in English. Your grasp of the language is truly remarkable. May I ask what year you are?

Best regards,

SinfulMind

PS. Typying from Poland (South East, close to Czech Republic and German borders).
person Nikte
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Harry is so cute when being insecure!!! It
person magentah
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You can't leave us hanging there! Aah! Haha. I love how much they worry for/about each other--it's lovely to read. I live in Boston. :) Next chapter, please! I'm going to be checking back like crazy to see if it's posted, lol.
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey really like your story =)

would really love to read more...

person magentah
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! :D Thank you! That will definitely tide me over until the smut comes. :) So glad to see some questions answered--ha, and I love that Harry's temper still flares when anyone else makes reference to having slept/played with Severus in the past. I'm very proud of him for learning to hold his tongue, though! As always, can't wait for the next update.
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So... To get more updates all we have to do is tell you how many times we look for updated chapter? Lol bc I seriously look about twice an hour... Even when I supposed to be listening to my intructor drone on and one about why his class is so importent... I could go through the rest of my college careerwithout it thank you very much. But, seriously, I love this story and have already read the chapters posted at least twice... Lol it is almost an obsession, so I desperately hopethat you keep up the amazing work! =)
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, the plot is moving fast and i finally get my contract signing. Yay! Will we be getting a look at the contract or just told the rules as we go?
I truly hope Snapes da is dead and if he is they find out who's trying mind f ery on Snape.
person magentah
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So much has happened! For one thing, I agree with unneeded--I think it's about time Severus established ground rules with Harry so the boy isn't walking into this so blindly. I was so not expecting a plot twist involving the elder Snape! Very curious to see where that goes. Also can't wait for more bondagey goodness. ;D Thanks for updating so quickly! I'm from the US, btw.
person magentah
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Excellent introduction to bondage for Harry. Especially for a first scene, I think he did quite well! Sorry I didn't get to review yesterday, had a long day at work. I can't wait to see how they interact afterward! Very much looking forward to the next update. :) I literally can't get enough of my favorite kinky boys and the fun situations you put them in. Thanks again for sticking with this story! I wish other readers weren't so lazy about reviewing--you deserve the praise. :D