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for Control

by estherkolbe

schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hopefully Har can hold out. Even if he's an S he's still unlikely to be S with out his master. He's to stubborn for that. would the bond give Snape a tug?
person magentah
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!

Oh no! I didn't even think about them showing up and stealing Harry! Oh boy. I hope Severus gets there in time, and that he doesn't automatically think Harry went after them alone. I won't be surprised if they do have a bit of misunderstanding drama about that. I'm worried! I've taken to covertly reading updates at work on my phone, which will clearly be happening again today. ;) Next chapter, please! :D
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What the heck! Stupid stupid tobias! Idiotic Bellatrix! Gah! Such a cliffie! Ahhhhhh!


Good
Chapter
Though!
person Nikte
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! So Tobias made a horcux? So need next chapter!!! and by sexual assult you mean rape, or Severus will arrive just in time to prevent it?
person magentah
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was sent home early (sick) from work today and the first thing I thought on my way out was "Hooray, I can reread all of Control!" Is that sad?
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy I forsee some miss understanding and posseive and angry Snape. Please don't make Harry seem to weak, but love the story.
person magentah
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, my giant review didn't post again. Anyway, loved it! All of it! I'm sorry I don't have the energy to rewrite my whole review again--it's late. I'll try in the morning. :)
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Smut rules! ;) I'd like to trade places with Harry if possible :P
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Need..... More.....chapters! Else, I may die of curiosity! I feel that Harry is going to try to play hero.... And that Sev is gonn be uber pissed! Like punish Harry every night for life pissed bc he can't let him leave bc he is starting to have feelingings for hi
.... Gah awesome chapter!
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh gah! Can I whine for more? Lol I thought this chapter was amazing! You have no idea just how badly I wish I was in Harrys place lol! Bc Sev is pretty awesome! I can't wait for more!=)