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interesting I look forward to more *S*

Wow, very promising story. Your style leaves much to be desires, but you should get better qith time. That last chapter was somehow confusing. First Snape is cold and stony, then kisses Harry, then again fucks him without much consideration and leaves after giving him sth for pain. Weird. I hope his not really with Draco - ewwww... Keep writing, just take more care with your style and try not to end the scenes so abruptly cuz it makes your readers confused.

oh dear... an amicable relationship this is not.

looks like this is going to be quite a bumpy relationship, even before we get into the d/s stuff.

I think I really love your writing and I think that Severus just might make good on that threat.

This first bit was delicious! Want more :D

typical head long Harry. so, despite the kink will there be any kids in their future?