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for Control

by estherkolbe

person AKCChamp
schedule July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! More please or another story!
schedule April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Kept reading through the 41 chapters of your story. Interesting. Very Interesting. I liked your characterisation of Severus. You gave him colour & depth. Harry not so much. He seemed to be missing character. He was rather one dimensional & very bland. The sex scenes, similar; bland. Really you had the skeleton of a marvellous story but you didn't manage to flesh it out with any detail. I think you have crafted the beginnings of a spectacular story here but need to to give it further work. Anyway, good luck with your future stories.
person Kelei
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"Be bonded"?
schedule December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to your sequel! I'm glad to hear there will be one as I was disappointed to see this story completed.
person magentah
schedule December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely end! I would absolutely love to read a sequel. In fact, it saves me the trouble of asking you to write one. :) I really enjoyed this story--thanks for sharing it with us.
schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hi :) i was so surprised when i saw that you had updated! i thought you were done with this story; but please, please, please continue this or write the sequel. i really enjoy reading your work and i think you are a wonderful writer! plus, your smut is delicious ;)
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, that explains a lot... still, famous last words Har.
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!! Draco saved the day!!! I'm so excited!!! So... Might there be some love and healing in an update soonish? Like today? Lol you know to make up For the horror Lucius put us through? Lol great chapter!
person magentah
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see an update! And to see Harry survive his torture. Btw, it's non-consensual, not non-consequential (sexual assault is full of consequences, as we can see here). Really really looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Harry doesn't suffer any/too many lasting effects from his abduction and subsequent torture, and that Severus lets him explain what happened before assuming that Harry ran willingly into trouble! Thanks for working this into your busy schedule. I can't even tell you how often I check for a new chapter--it's just sad. ;)
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Thank you thank you thank you! I feel so much better now abouttheir relationship! Great chapter!