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omg im hooked to this story, and the fact that you left it on a cliff hanger doesnt help XD i really hope you update soon

I really like this story. Its been a while since i have seen it. I hope you continue to update when you can. there weren't too many mistakes that i could see.

wow, I have to say I adore this story! very in-depth characters, excellent story line, twist and turns and now Lupin knows du du DUH! Really cant wait to read the next addition! Thanks for sharing your greatness!!!

Oooh! Good cliffhanger! Sirius is totally a jerk, I was feeling all my teenage angst coming back reading that- which is a really good complement to you! I also love that you have made her kind of friends with Snape, although I am dreading what happens with him and Lily just as much as she is! I was a little confused about the interaction with Regulus, but maybe she was too, so maybe that is what you intended.

Excellent chapter! Thank you for mentioning me, it's so rare for reviewers to recieve public acknowledgement.

I have read hundreds, nay, thousands of fanfics. This is the best one on the whole internet. Can't wait to read more. :)

I really like the story but... Well... If they haven't become animagi yet, then they don't have their names nor the map yet, -right? If you stick with the timeline...? Just a thought and a small question. And like I said, I like the story, so don't take this as a flame.

Hello!
I usually am not one for reviewing but I just had to say that this story is fantastic. I couldn't stop reading it, even though I knew at this point there were only four chapters posted. I love the specific details and just the amount of thought that has been put into it. I had always liked the whole going back in time kind of plot, so I'm pretty excited and can see that this story's gonna be a good one from what I've read so far. Anyway, keep up the awesome work. You definitely have a fan :)
-Khristyn

i really like this story. I like that the chapters are longer. please continue with this story.

This is marvelous. This is the best Hermione-goes-back-to-the-Maruader-era-time-travel fic I ever read. It keeps the characterizations of individuals very well, and unusually, Dumbledore DOESN'T automatically know what's going on. I love the fact that the Marauders act like the Weasley twins part of time and prats the other half and just a glimpse of the warriors they will be for the Order. I also like that they didn't decide to become unregistered animagi on a whim but to protect Remus from other werewolves. I also like the charactarization of teenage Snape,that he once acted like a boy his age; shy, carefree, smiling... but only around Lily. His childhood was probably too hard to ever be a carefree child, he's a half-blood in Slytherin, he probably doesn't have very many friends there and hardly anyone goes out of their way to makes friends with Slytherins. Lily was probably the only thing keeping him from becoming as embittered as he is as an adult. You see hints of it in this fic, so when she withdrew her friendship......and then died a several years later.... wonderfully written.