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by mimi1234

schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such a great story!! Please write a sequel! I want them to be together. :)
person Bournespeed
schedule September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a great story, I really enjoyed it. I'll be hoping they met up again after Hermione graduated and carried on where they left off :) keep up your writing, you spin a good yarn.
person Samibear
schedule September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really!!! That's it.
schedule September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a very sad, but beautiful and right ending. Thank you for sharing it with us! HG4eva
person elh
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great story just one flaw. you use sat wrong repeatedly. for ex. "Snape was sat at his desk" is english your second language? of course it should be "Snape was sitting at his desk. other than that, good job. i like it.
schedule September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hot hot hot, what a marvellous chapter, even if they didnt do the deed, yet:-))
person Raven
schedule September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I get so excited every time I see a new chapter up. I am really enjoying this story. Please continue!
person use2b2t2
schedule September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a hot, hot chapter!

Mare
schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, this was hot!!! Fantasticly well written, I can't wait to get the next chapter:-))
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
write more soon!!