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Ouch. I mean, I like a good Weasley bashing like most people, but this isn't bashing. Hermione isn't some poor, misunderstood girl. She's fucked up, and not in the good way. She fucks around, for the sole purpose of having the option to throw that in Ron's face one day when her mood swings her that way.

If your plan was to make Hermione a completely unlikeable cunt, a job well done, I must admit.

I freaking loved this. Your smut was amazing, totally hot and realistic. The emotions too, the way Harry thinks about how as soon as he walks back in the tent it will be over- well done and a little heartbreaking. Even the idea that hermione slept with the other guys- normally I'd scoff but the way you wrote it made it absolutely believable. Loved this!

Okay I cannot be the only one that wants another fic. A threesome between Draco/Hermione/Harry. That would just be yummy.

poor Hermione???... POOR HERMIONE???... This must be a joke!!!... This fic. is soooo sick!... and not for the smut!!!

You must mean Poor Ron!!!... To have a stupid, back-stabbing Harry and a cry-baby, whore Hermione as best friends!!!... It's not a surprised He left them!!!

...I really don't think Ron's de-iluminator would send him back to this kind of shitty/back-stabbing 'friends'!... So without this 'horrible' Ron, Harry can happily drown in the frigid pound, and Hermione can enjoy to be raped and killed by Voldemort and his D.E.

This way all would have their happy ending!

I really hope, you don't think anyone can see Hermione 'behaving' as something not-twisted and sick!!!

Nice read. I was actually surprised by Hermione's exploitations. It kind of threw me off to be honest, but then when she started explaining her reason for doing it, it made more sense. I also liked your writing style it flowed nicely and I loved the way you described Harry's emotions. Thanks for giving us a very different take on the whole in a tent scene and welcome back to the site!

shame it's only a one shot

Great fic. Good ploting, great grammar and spelling. I really like how crude and raw you wrote the sex. Sometimes writers forget that the terms you choose to describe the sex will reflect how the reader feels the scene. Just a few more things:

I'm a Harmony shipper, but I love good stories where Harry and Hermione are just in for a good hard fuck. That's one of the reason why I like this ship, they are versatile as a couple. You can write them as a romantic couple or as just fuck buddies and they work.

I really appreciate the fact that you didn't stopped after the sex and actually explained why Hermione went for Harry. Also how Harry started the fic completely freaked out but by the end of it he's accepting what happened and why. Plot and character development in a one-shot which could just be PWP is great.

The parallel between Draco and Harry was interesting. Specially considering how Hermione describes the Draco-sex as a hate-fuck when the Harry-sex was obviously a comfort-fuck. The fact she only got pleasure from two diametrically opposite experiences makes for a very interesting reading.

Finally, the implication that Hermione sleeps with other guys to hurt Ron back. Considering that Ron won't stop suddenly hurting Hermione, I wonder if she would continue to do it every time she fells injured by Ron. And how Harry would respond to this destructive downward spiral now that he knows about it. Would he choose Hermione's side more often? Would he try to make Ron apologize more? Or would he try to stop Hermione to hurt herself by being the one she fucks in retaliation? So many possibilities for this fic. I'm looking for the sequel.

One more thing: why isn't this fic in the Harry/Hermione? It'll be easy to find later.