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by CryingCinderella

person Mary
schedule August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy canes CryingCinderella, the story is getting so deep! I think Severus is faking the cane... just want to try another treatment... I hope I'm right! Otherwise she is absolutely right, the most embarrassing moment of your life!
Gosh, so emotional and hot at the same time. Love IT!
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh wow (fanning self) that was hot... hot hot hot... I'd jump Severus too if I were Hermione! lol

oh but now... she really has been throwing herself at him even if she didn't realize it until now. Of course he would take her up on that. But now that she does realize it I think she'll be able to at least try to control her actions if not her thoughts lol. Of course Snape is angry... he doesn't want her doing things just because he's a patient and then she keeps taking his choice away because she keeps confronting him. Maybe if she sticks to being professional even though it's obvious she can't stop reacting to him will make him do a little bit of chasing to get HER to react instead of her doing that to him. Turnabout is fair play :)

I really like how she keeps playing in his hair. Very sexy. Hope you write more soon!!!!!!!!!
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omgosh omgosh omgosh!!! You did NOT stop right there! Nooooo!!!!!!!!!! Now I'm so glad I hadn't read this before and was able to read so many chapters all at once... because you...you... just left it there! With... with... arrrrgggggg!!!!!

Evil author... evil evil author. You're typing the next chapter and about a dozen more right? Right? Get crackin' at that keyboard because you're killing me!

Hmmm... wonder if Hermione will lend him that book?
person Missycam
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO You CAN'T end right here!!!!!!
I wanna know what happens!!!!!! Please, please, PLEASE update ASAP :-D
person midnightwakeonyou
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhh hahahahaha poor snape this wasnt what he expected at all.. and thats for the cliffhanger that was so not nice of you
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I soooo totally love this fic! It is really unique and I love the flip flopping asshole Snape that is then forced to go to her for treatment. Hell of a cliffhanger, woman! Her hand on his cock and he wants to know if she will maintain protocol? OMG!! Hahaha! Looking forward to your update!
person Mary
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! Another fabulous yummy chapter. I like the treatment you created and the interactions are fantastic. I am very happy you make him go to her; otherwise will be very hard (no pun intended) for Hermione to deal with being the one giving first (another one
person Missycam
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck! You can't possibly know how happy I am to see you write again!!! THANK YOU!!!!
So... they fucked two times in one day and he's still a total prick... I'm not surprised here
Now I'm intrigued, what's this new traitment...?

Update soon please :-D
Missy
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Tantric Thereputia, yeah that's going to make Snape very happy. I would guess that it has something to do with sexual healing, as Tantric is in the name. Apparently, Hermione was already on the right track with the sex, right? I'm sure that Poppy took vacation knowing that the younger witch would likely turn the old man on. I cannot wait to read more about the drama.
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ok... I am only up to chapter 2 and I am loving this story! I love how Hermione is trying to preserve Snape's dignity as much as possible but also how he is reacting and how she can't help but keep peeking! Off to read more!