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Ohhhhhh that's so promising I need to read more.... :-P
I wonder though if Hermione will quit the handjob for a blowjob anytime soon.... :-P

LOL! Sex as an universal cure!

I totally think that she should be an utter bitch and leave the room. Let him take care of his issues since he's being such a total and utter arse. Why not leave him hanging? Perhaps he'd then beg for her to give him what he truly needs instead of insulting her. I could see her saying, "Fine if you're going to be that way, then I'll leave you to take care of it." Or she could just demand he take care of it and then kindly escort himself out of her personal chambers so she can bloody well sleep if he was going to be such an ungrateful pinhead. I know both very mean, but though I would love to read another well written and overly stimulating sexual scene between the two, I really think she needs to stand up to the surly professor and make him think twice about insulting her next time. Me thinks Severus is a bit of a masochist.

Well that was surely getting him back but I didn't even consider the possbility of completely hummiliating him. I guess that does wonders for his attitude. Though I cannot help but wonder why he'd be so afraid of her checking his prostrate, it is a typical Muggle examination of a man his age, right? I'm seriously enjoying this story. I can't wait to see what happens in the hospital wing.

I So love this story! It has actually inspired me to play with a similar plot... Do give all credit to you for the inspiration. If you happen to decide to have a look, please let me kno what you think!

Ohhhhhhh I love the twist!!!!!
Ahhhh thx Minerva for pointing out the obvious...
Please hurry up I wanna see what happen next ;-)

I feel so bad for Severus and Hermione! I can see how he made her angry but knowing him she probably never expected him to react that way. And Severus being humiliated is so hard to see especially after all he's been through. His sneering has kept his feelings safe for a long time and seeing his real feelings and reactions is not something that others get to see. I think describing Hermione as feeling sick about the incident is very accurate.

Love love love this story and I love how you have written this couple. I can't wait to read more about them :)

Oh... you also kept me up till 3:30 am reading The Fantasy Book! Whoo Hooo is that hot. (I was too tired to write a review yet) but dang... can't wait to hear Snape's fantasy :)

You've done a wonderful job of expressing believable shifts in tension and doubt between the characters.

Wow!! Another amazing chapter. You really know how to weave a tale. I don't now who to feel worse for Severus or Hermione. This is a situation neither one of them ever thought they would find themselves in. So much pain and then pleasure one is unsure of wanting or giving. I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story! It's very well written and the end of each chapter leaves me wanting more! I can't wait to read what happens next.