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by CryingCinderella

person guiltypleasure2
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was completely choked up through this whole chapter. This was unbelievably difficult to read, though I do understand that you wanted us to really understand his horror's. I am hoping that you can give him peace. It is sad that not one of them will be held accountable for their actions.
person Mary
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Such sadness and heart breaking moments. You have created a very compeling story, great dinamics and sure hope all will work out for our dear Severus and of course for Hermione as well.
person chyara
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope he is able to be healed.. This deserves a happyending.
person chester
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That absolute ********! OMG, I am so into this story. I love it. I only ask one thing - please have Hermoine take a few minutes and blast James Potter's grave - or somehow with the resurrection stone torment him in the afterlife. It's what he deserves.
person Missycam
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gods! That was painful to read.... Fuck! I even cried!
Please tell me Hermione will make these aweful memories go away!?

Awesome story, please update soon ;-)
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want to cry (good job though!) I'm sure you meant 'taut' muscles.
person Rlr
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far, I hope that you haven't abandoned it as I can't wait for the next chapter:)
person Missycam
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oye that was sad! I'm glad Hermione finished with the difficult questions
Update soon please :-)
person guiltypleasure2
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor dear Severus, there is so much more to him that we could ever imagine. I hope that she will be able to get to the root of the problem and set him free.
person notlori925
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story. i just finished catching up. it is so sad for everyone involved. severus for not only being in physical pain but also obviously having some deep seeded psychological trauma. and Hermione having to deal with the frustration of not being able to help him but also feeling like some kind of sexual predator. cannot wait for the next chapter.