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by CryingCinderella

schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah so the old dingy decided to take three years. I had a feeling that Hermione at some point would end up pregnant. I think that was quite the brilliant ending to such a heart wrenching at times but all together lovely story. You really are a weaver of words and an excellent developer of character. It's a perfect ending but it left me with the desire for more. In the end I guess I'll just have to weave my own ending or think on what it might be like for those two raising twins. I really hope their girls because lordy knows those two won't survive two who act just like the Weasley Twins. I also think twin girls would have their father easily wrapped around their little fingers. Yeah Severus deserves daughters as brilliant as their mother and as cunning and talented as their father. Oh yeah the wizarding world is in for a world of hurt when those two reach eleven. Just thinking about the genes involved in the Granger/Snape spawn may just put Albus Dumbledore out of business as the genius he was known for back in his day.
person lc
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I protest!
This is not concluded enough! Epilogue part 2! Haha, I'm sorry. I just so thoroughly enjoy you're writing and especially this piece that I do not want it to end. Simply brilliant.
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awe, what a great ending. I do so love a happy Severus and you more than delivered that with them pregnant with twins and leaving for good. Amazing story and one that I am sure I will go back and re-read.
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww, yay for them. lol I hope he made an honest woman of her after all those years, especially now that she's having his children. I also like to think he's gotten less mean to her.Thanks, HG4eva
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a smashing story this has been, well written, well plotted and very entertaining. You should consider submitting it at other archives too, so even more fans of Hermione/Severus could enjoy it. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.
person Mary
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WooooooooW, I love the treatent, the decitions made and Sveru's whole shuting her up with hand, fingers and kissessssss... yummmm. Love it, love it, adore it!
person Missycam
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm sad to know you decided to end your fic but I completly understand ;-)
It was a beautiful story and I will be waiting patiently for the epilogue (I dare hope they will be in a romantic relationship in the end :-P )

Thank you and good luck for your other stories ;-)
person ShannonE
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... :-)

What an emotional rollercoaster for our favorite potions master!

Looking forward to the "epilogue"
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved this line. "This was soft thin lips sliding over hers with his prominent nose nudging against the side of her nose, warm breath against her lips with the soft strands of his hair brushing against her face." Be still my heart, the beginning of this chapter was wonderful, perfect, beautiful
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I left a review on the last chapter but forgot to sign in so it is under "Anon" Just wanted you to know that I really enjoyed the last chapter and can't wait to get a glimpse into their future.