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You know, he must have been protesting because of attraction to her, whereas Poppy didn't have the same effect. ;D It takes guts for him to proposition her like that, but she did graze him a few times so perhaps he had reason to take that chance. Is she a virgin, though? It didn't seem like it when she thought about having seen equipment before in and out of work, but she'd never been propositioned. Just made me wonder.

OK...all I can say is AWKWARD!!! Looking forward to reading more!

MOREMOREMORMEMROEMOEMREOMEOMRE I LOVE THIS! I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL TMW :'(

AUGH! What a cliffhanger! :)

Evil cliffie ending Chapter 3! Damn you!! (But seriously, great fic so far. Now, don't take too long to update, mkay?)

What a fantastic chapter, absolutely perfect. I hope Hermione will "handle" the situation with grace and passion, leaving both of them satisfied rather than imbarressed. It does make me think though that Severus protests about Hermiones qualifications migth be rooted in a totally different "problem" than her educational qualifications:-))

Well, talk about BIG cliffhangers... great chapter and waiting with tingling eyes for the update,

Poor Snape, I can't think of many things that would be more humiliating to him than to have to admit weakness AND be naked in front of a former student. But we can't get to the sexy good times without some tension right?! ;)

I absolutely love your stories, and this one is no different. However, I can't help but take the cynical view that this one too will end up being shelved for an extensive amount of time. You are an absolutely brilliant writer and it is positively frustrating beyond belief when I find a fantastic story that never gets finished. Do you plot out your concepts before you begin writing, or is it a more organic flow that you explore as you write? While there are merits to both, if you tend to employ the former please consider constructing a general plot line before you begin only for the sake of consistent updates and completion (certainly not for lack of outstanding plot!). It is my opinion from reading a number of your pieces that you clearly have exceptional skill and talent and I would love to be able to see where you take the characters in all of your stories. This review comes from a place of sincere love for your work, so please don't take this as a "flamer."
Love, Peace, & Lemons,
LadyxEmpire

Absolutely loved it, I am willing to bet that Hermione gave him a massage far superior of any massage given to him before, it was wonderfully written!