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I normally wouldn't do this and just wait patiently for an update,but I like your story so much I've been checking every day for an update. Can we get a smidgen more? Or at least an eta on the next chapter?

Absolutely enthralling story line. I find myself checking for an update daily! Beautiful three dimensional character development. The struggle within each of them is clearly displayed without being in the least bit trite. All in all, wonderful job, please continue to write. I have to say that this is one of my absolute favorite stories on the entire site (other authors, please keep in mind this opinion is purely subjective, no flames). Thank you for this story and I do hope you continue it :)

Fantastic story! I always look forward to your works, you are such a talented author. I am also forever in debt to Lady Grey, who it seems has given a jump start to your creative story juices! I would start one of your stories, and then find it back on the proverbial shelf, just begging to be finished. You seem to know just how to leave us hanging, which creates fantastic suspense and always leaves us wanting more!

I salute you Cinderella!

Hello Cinderella,

I don't normally review but I am so entirely impressed with your description of massage (I'm a therapist) and remedial treatments are so rarely described anyway I had to tell you that you've done a great job. I hope your writing is long lived and satisfying for you and thank you for sharing your work.

Regards,
Peter

My my... on one hand I'm feeling a bit sorry for the poor old aging man, but on the other... I honestly laughed out loud when he left the hospital wing all huffy... I can just imagine the look on his face while shouting 'unacceptable', and most likely muttering it all the way up to Minerva's office as well... It's interesting, and well written, though I expected nothing less from you. Great work, keep it up!

I'm really enjoying this story, but I have to nitpick that when you used the word "roll" several times in Chapter 4, it should have been "role". I don't normally comment on such things, but your story is honestly too good to have that mistake in it.

Thanks for the note- I fixed it. I was in a rush last night and it was late. But I'm generally not so atrocious with my grammar. I promise. Cheers! xoxo ~CC

I have only just found this story today and read all three chapters in one go. And WOW! What a story it is. Poor Snape, he must feel so humiliated. Ok, he seems to feel quite something different now.

Very nicely written and their respective reactions seem realistic enough. I can hardly wait for the next chapter, after you left it with such a cruel cliffhanger ;) But I can't help but wonder, if it won't be possible to find a real cure for Snape, a permanent one I mean. Of course, to have Hermione help him for as long as she stays at Hogwarts is what we all dream about, and maybe have something more develop out of that as well. Still - Snape deserves better than to be dependent on someone to help him for the rest of his life, even if it should turn out to be Hermione.

You are a very, very talented writer, I have already enjoyed other stories from you before and hope you will go on writing for a long time yet.

oh my gosh! why! why would you do that to me! how cruel to stop right there! hehe please update! can't wait to see where this goes! (although i dare say i can guess where this is leading) >=] ....fantastic as always!

Ugh!!! Cruel cruel CRUEL cliff hanger, but obviously an applause is due. I love how you've stayed true to what I believe to be the original construct of the characters. This particular pairing can sometimes be difficult to foster given the nature of both individuals, however obviously compatible they may be(!), but you have managed to do it while keeping with both of their original personalities. I avidly await the next installment!
Peace, Love, & Lemons,
LadyxEmpire

My email is sketch8585@aol.com, I look forward to hearing from you.