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by CryingCinderella

schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh My GAwd!!!!!! She's got some nerve and balls and massive cajonas going to his chambers and being so brazen, can't wait for more I love how she challenges him right back!
person Sarah Ann
schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am very much enjoying your story thus far. You have a very descriptive way of explaining the surroundings and the thought process though the action process. Hermione's inner monologue sometimes drags on a touch too long but I still get the message trying to be conveyed.
Keep up the good work.

person colao
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
really looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OK WTH? Is he in denial or does he really not remember?? Interesting.
person EvaBrick
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! :D Thanks for updating! :)
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gah I wish he'd just get over himself! Great chapter... I'm just ready for Sev to man up! Lol
person Celest
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you suck.... how can you stop there:) Frustration does not even begin to describe what I felt the moment I saw please review ... update soon
person dracosgirl007
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MORE, PLEASE!!!!
person crownglass39
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...just ....yeah that works.
Poor Severus just doesn't know how to deal with his feelings does he?
person Tinymandi
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Hermione. She needs some release! So much sexual tension! I love this story.