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This is incredible writing. I hope author's works are available, also, on back-up sites like AO3 or Fanfiction.Net, if AFF does not continue. There are so many good works like this worth archiving.

The story is spellbinding (no pun intended, woven well, in this dark, relentless work.

Would like to know if Tarpeia has continued with works elsewhere.

Sooo, this took me ages to see and review again, sorry about that! I lost the internet. xD Anyway, I just read the third chapter, I think it was, At Hogwarts, and it was fantastic. <3 So dark, and yet so lovely. I noticed there are two more chapters to read once I wake up, and hopefully you will continue to write more. It's a shame there aren't more Lily/Severus writers out there who can do the character's justice.

Well this chapter was certainly interesting. Not that Severus did not have a presence in the previous chapters, but it was really fascinating to see him try so many ruses to get Lily to love him. With her now trying to get herself to love him I'm curious to read how this dynamic will play out. Now with Severus' little hint, I think I might have an idea on where this fanfic will go but I'll hold my opinions to myself till your next update :D Lovely chapter as always and I'll be patiently awaiting your next update!

Ps: How much later in time are you planning on going? Just asking because I'm curious to know what kind of personality Severus Jr. will have.

I was at the edge of my seat the entire time reading this. It's so dark and hurtful I just bawled my eyes out. I suppose the best review I can give is the bravado at not backing down from writing such a humiliating and harsh experience. Keep the Quill Down,

~Nio

So apparently my last review got cut off so I'll rewrite it. 1) Kudos for another excellent chapter. 2) I'm curious to know if you're planning on writing about what happens after Lily's "10 years" are up or if she ever tries to escape. 3) I'm super happy to know that you're going to write more chapter :D Keep up the good work.

Holy crap. I've read and reread this fanfic like 3 times just because it's that good. You're writing style, the way you write the characters, making Snape so twisted, is done so smoothly and well. I'm actually kind of sad that you're only planning on writing another chapter. I sincerely hope that you continue to write more Snape/Lily in the future.

Also, only 2 reviews? Damn this place is dead <_<

Just like the last, this chapter was great. Sad what happened with Petunia, though. It`s nice seeing that Lily and Harry were alike, with the way she treats the house elves is like Harry had.
I do hope they have a good ending. :) Looking forward to reading the final chapter, keep up the good work.

I don`t see why there are no reviews yet, but this story is fairly new, so I suppose...
Anyway, I loved the story, and I really do hope you continue it. I love your writing style and the characters are kept well enough in canon.
The only thing plotwise I would have in mind is for her to try to escape, maybe sometime he actually gets mad at her. And maybe for someone to get to her in the manor sometime after her attempted escape?
At Hogwarts she may try to attempt to gather the kids or order members in a desperate attempt to both escape and start a new war. All the while, she can be trying to learn to block Sev out?
I dunno, more bad things, some good things, and yeah. Keep up this great story. :3