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for Ron's willing sex slaves

by vampirekitty

person magentah
schedule September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your sentence structure could use some work but the idea is great. :)
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was a good concept and I liked it. Definitely need to have it someone beta it. But otherwise, good job.

person Tesgura
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sexy concept, I like the idea. You need a beta though. And it's 'Sirius', not 'Serious'.