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hmmm. i wonder what changed luc's walk and poor draco is in shock. what a bad time to go into shock. I mean, come on, we all pretty much knew it was Luc, Draco just didn't want to admit it. Still, i look forward to seeing how the hell they get outta this one. maybe har should just send up a big firework like flare and then bolt... though he'd have to have draco in tow.

about #20...

You know, as time goes on you continue to have a better grasp on the
personalities of Harry Potter & Draco Malfoy. To the point that you
can write them equally without having to focus on one character then
jump to another in the next paragraph or chapter. It just flows...almost
like watching TV. :-)

get what I mean?

i think Draco might be splashing in Egyptian rivers where it comes to the id of the bloke leading the 'death eaters'. After, daddy's gotten out before and there aren't dementors to stop him now.
interesting... snape's being helpful. I wonder if the world is going to end now. :P Oh I understand his reasons, it's just surprising.
I'm glad draco has the good sense to take har with him at least. even if it's a rather hare brained scheme.

I'm glad Snape has decided to help, even if it's only because he thinks Harry has finally started growing a brain! The exchange about 'groping' in charms class was funny and sweet. I can't wait for more.

Ah friendship, how nice. Sweet chapter in that sense, I couldn't keep from laughing when Ron was speaking with Hermione, the poor boy didn't realize he was causing his own death with each word. Poor Harry as well! He is developing a crush on Draco and he doesn't even have the time to think about it. I sincerely hope his life gets less complicated soon, the dear needs a break. Pansy being there wasn't odd but her being with Lucius certainly was, especially with her hating Draco. Even more interesting that Draco doesn't seem to know anything about what is happening. Lucius always manages to get into the worst situations, honestly you think the man would learn the lay low after all the trouble he caused his family. Glad to see you update this, keep up the good work and I can't wait until the next chapter.

Also are we going to see Draco's development in all this? I know Harry surprises him and he trusts Harry but all of those are still in the friendship realm.

~Fullmoon

about #19...

Your inner comedian is slooowly shining through! :-)

I think this was a fun chapter, the 'tit-for-tat' between
them was a refreshing exchange, instead of the upfront constant
worry over what concerns Draco at the moment. Yes, I know it was
mentioned but the other things that was focused on like Draco's
continued mentioning of Harry's forgetfulness of their meeting
displayed how comfortable they've gotten with each other...whether
they both notice or not. Then, there was Harry's wry humor shining
through as well.

...and of course, Ron's near death experience of being 'flayed alive
by words' from Hermione had me anticipating WHAT it was she would have
said to the thoughtless & insensitive one.

oh dear, THAT's going to cause problems! poor Har, so much to deal with and not a decent nights sleep between them. I wonder what the wolfwere will do now?
The bit with Mio preparing to tear strips out of Ron made me grin. Especially Har's most Slyth, but very intelligent, retreat. ^^
I have a feeling Har's learning to manage Malofy's... or at least his malfoy, will be very important in the future.

Lucius Malfoy?! His son owes Harry two life debts and Harry owes Narcissa one and he's plotting against Harry? He is mad?! Great update!

Is Lucius trying to destroy his family or what?

I love everything about this. Once more you have taken a strange situation and made it seem as believable as the cannon story line! You write all the characters very well, but I must say that you have a particular skill for writing a believable post war Draco. I hate the way a lot of writers work him, it's like he's not even Draco anymore! Well done, and I can't wait for more! :)