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I just came to conclusion with this last chapter (22), why I love so much Parsimony and World in peaces. Harry is most independent, cheeky, clever and strong there, and of course little bit of dark. He doesn t listen to adults, but if somethings go wrong, he try to make amends, ehm sometimes. In other stories he relate to events and in the end he change by himself, but in this two, even if he do something new, it doesn t feel out of character. I kind of don t like, if Harry is in first chapter Harry and at the end of story, he become someone else (I.T.). It is worst, when he starts drastically change in the second chapter (in this case, maybe I would feel better about characters like Albus and Scorpius, because, we really don t know about their personalities much). Well, and I absolutelly love when Harry speak for himself and it sound .... clever.

Thank you for the update! It was wonderful.

This is interesting, it seems rare that someone writes a mature Harry. He's been through hell and yet some still keep him naive about things in the world. Keep up the good work, and I do hope the wolfwere can find closure for the loss of his pups.

Leania

It wasn't until Harry got hit with the tripping spell that I realized I had been holding my breath throughout that entire scene. Was Draco unconcious or frozen in shock? I can't imagine him letting Harry carry him otherwise. I am so proud of Harry for standing up for himself! He definitely needs to do that more often, the ministry is horrible enough without Harry letting them do whatever they want concerning him. It would be so wondeful if Draco actually did tell Harry not to let McGonagal interrupt him, because then he would have heard Harry call him special~ That tid bit would certainly be food for fodder, I can already see Draco brooding lol. I am going to give Draco the benefit of the doubt and hope he cast the spell wrong, though I do not put it past Lucius to do something as insane as start another attack. That man must be polluted from years of using the Dark Arts. Great chapter as always, and I can not wait for the next update.

~Fullmoon

about #22..

Well now! As I was definitely the cheerleader here cheering
Harry on as he fought with enough finesse to put an experienced
Auror to shame....'Go Harry!' :-D

Then, when you get to the end & he's holding his own against Klein
& McGonagall, I was REALLY like...'You Go Harry!

This was def' an exciting chapter! :-)

damn me but you're talented. fight scenes, sex scenes you just roll them out like they were nothing. I could practically see that fight scene. *sighs enviously.
anyway, about the story... poor draco. this must have shocked him to the core. Harry though, Harry was awesome AND he did it with no fatalities this time. His natural talent just kicks absolute arse. I could feel a bit sorry for Klien whose only trying to do her job but sadly, Har's points are well made. the Ministry almost seems directed by the press and the press are screwy as a spiral stair case. the fall out from this, i think, will be major.

Another clifhenger, Lomonaaeren queen of them. I still read my favorit stories of yours, just still don t have time to reply (more like month of work ahead of me). I just wanted to wish you Happy New Year and lot of ideas and strength for everyday updates, you are great, so I hope in this year your wishes will come true.

*facepalm* Draco just had to drop all of the artifacts, and they were doing so well. It was a fun chapter, it's always interesting when Draco and Harry end up sharing thoughts. I'm curious about what the rippling meant, so did the spell not work correctly or is it really Lucius? I really hope it isn't Lucius, that will complicate things exponentially for both Harry and Draco. I was delighted to see this updated, another cliffhanger but as you do them to me so often I believe I have developed a slight immunity, I'm not aass anxious for the next chapter. Still pretty anxious though, keep up the good work.

Also what did you mean by Draco's eyelashes fluttering like a tattoo?

~Fullmoon

Very exciting, more adventures and Harry is realizing how much he cares for Draco. Good all around I must say. I agree with you about it not being in Draco's pov, it's a nice contrast to some of your other stories. Really that chapter was so fun I don't have much else to say. Can't wait for the next one obviously and as usual keep up the great work dearie.

~Fullmoon

OMG. How did Lucius get out of Azkaban? I hope Harry is able to get them out of there-with all the artifacts! Great update!