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Soo, what exactly Draco meant when he said

I'm loving the progression. It's slower than most stories that I read, and I like that the you're giving everyone time to really develop rather than just "Oh, I like you now!" Can't wait for more!

Oh good chapters, glad I only had to get caught up on two. I hope this ritual Draco's working on works for him. Then again, if it does work, will Draco begin to be stand off-ish towards Harry again? Can't wait to see what's cookin' ;)

Leania

so basically, things are either about to be sorted on the Slyth front... or head even further up sewage creek, in a boat thats about to spring a leak, with out paddles and headed for that surprise waterfall.
I liked Minnie's attitude. she really made me grin. 'when it all goes pear shaped, do remember to come to me hmmm.' man she's fun.

wow, draco is more confusing than any girl on the planet ever thought of being. I can sort of understand him wanting a bit of proof of less than perfection from the one he's forced to rely on... but under his circumstances... would focus and perfection bet more useful... oh well, stress brings strange effects to the most collected of ppl.

about #24...

LoL! I'm going to have to read this again, because Draco is
SO conflicted that he even has MY head spinning along with
Harry! :-)

WTH! I mean seriously Draco, can u not just accept the fact
Harry's helping because...yes he WANTS to & it's not necessarily
a need? That maybe he likes you as a person, despite your background?

Anyway, good chapter Lomona...

I really LOVE this story and can't wait to read more! Please post more soon! Thanks so much for sharing it!

Yes, maybe it is because of cannon, but I think it is about more dominant Harry, which have relatively stable personality, too. I don t say, that I don t enjoy your others stories (when I have time), because I do, it just that I like this two most. I wrote in last review, just my thoughts like wanna be writer. One book about writing mentioned, that you have to look for, what you like in stories most(maybe I mentioned this already somewhere). I just wrote you my selfanalysis about my top 2 stories from your H/D collection. It was quite rude in retrospective, sorry. And of course this selfanalysis collided with my earlier opinion, that you clearly can write original story, with your "wardrobe" full of personalities :).
Back to Parsimony: I can t wait to learn about Snape next life acocmodations - What is Lucius part in whole mess -If there is impostor, who is it - healing of cursed Slynterins and I hope that Harry will have some sleep in the future, beacuse this is not healthy behaviour :D.

first off i hope this works. my lap top cracked it so i'm using my desk top compy which is a couple of years old now and shows it's age in speed... or rather lack of it. It also needs to be reset at least once a day or it gets bogged down and clunky.
anyway, I'm glad snape's free. that's one obligation off har's list.
wow, so who the heck is it if it's not luc? And how and why do they look like him. if it is luc, where did he hear about the experiments and from whom.
lol, poor har. he needs to start getting some decent rest soon, or he'll fall over.

about #23...

That moment where Harry gives Severus his blood for the ritual wasa nice touch, it actually
gave me an idea for a story I wanted to throw at you.

I'm happy for Harry that he'll be able to tell Draco now, that the man they saw may not be
Lucius. Hope things look up for Harry at that point..and he needs to start dropping hints
that he likes Draco. Haven't seen that done in a story you've done yet. There's always the
clueless, but never someone trying to give a clue.

..and hopefully when everything is said & done, the poor child will be able to get some
sleep! :-D