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for Parsimony

by Lomonaaeren

schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I rather like it's lighter tone... but that may be because I've been reading a bit of angsty stuff lately. Having such a go with the flow, roll with it harry is a bit of a relief. Got quite a bit on his plate does young Har atm. I hope he can manage it cause he's not going to be the only one suffering otherwise.
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nice start to thing. and poor harry, sucked into things once again. looking forward to seeing where you go with this
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, Har's choices are moi interesting. Sucks to be Snape right now. so, how does it feel writing this? It seems to have a much lighter tone than some of your other stuff.
person SParker
schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

This story feels so...casual. I'm beginning
to think it's about 'lessons learned' or some
sort and normally I know what it is you're
writing about from the get-go.

Like I said, this is interesting.

...and after reading the first two sentences, I
can't help feel that Canon Harry has lived a sad
life in a way. Despite the friends he has, he was
constantly fighting all his life & never had a chance
to REALLY experience things as an actual teenager.

I'm surprised you haven't done a story like that yet.
schedule September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woah, snape ... if it is snape, must be truly desperate. Still, go Harry's helping people thing. It was rather daft of him not to leave word with anyone though. what if it was a trap by left over d.e.s or someone hexed with whatever spell is afflicting the Slyths?
person SParker
schedule September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

..and you just HAD to leave it there. :-p
person SParker
schedule September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #2...

I really HAVE to say this has a different tone to it.
Is there a theme to look for?
schedule September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
He is indeed. I see Harry's 'helping people thing' is still alive, well and doing its thing.
person SParker
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know, I was reading this story and ACTUALLY forgot who was
writing it, because this story has a completely different tone
to it.

I'm actually curious to see what you do with this.
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this would be a one shot but it's not *hums happily. It's not.
Wow, you're just motoring through these stories. I think only one's left that you started are Ashborn, that one with no romance and that horror one with Harry and draco going through his killer property. that's pretty damn impressive. I truly wish you made something off these considering how much time and effort goes into them
just checked your list. I forgot about intoxicate the sun cause i haven't read it and sanctum but hey, remembering 3 unfinished off the top of my head ain't bad right? *makes face.
The review before me was right too. Likee that one with no romance, this has a really different feel.