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October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now we're getting into the meaty bits of the story. har has killed in truth but i believe, the will, the intent to kill if need be has existed before. They were in a freaking war, on the front line. You don't survive there without the intent to kill. Not sure why the aura chika is so surprised over it. They all KNOW har has a steel will, this is just proof there of.
I love how har took charge with the wolfwere to. most diplomatic of him and I hope he can get the poor being some answers.
As for Malfoy... well, that should help with the snape sitch at least.
I love how har took charge with the wolfwere to. most diplomatic of him and I hope he can get the poor being some answers.
As for Malfoy... well, that should help with the snape sitch at least.
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September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #8...
Well now, things are starting to get interesting...and
I'm not sure about Klein.
Well now, things are starting to get interesting...and
I'm not sure about Klein.
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September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, covered quite a bit of ground with this one. So Har, if you go around collecting enough people who need help, eventually you might find some of these ppl can help the others. hopefully snape will let har tell malfoy... he really needs the help.
magical allergy... lol.
heh, it followed me out, if i can keep it from getting killed, can i keep it?
magical allergy... lol.
heh, it followed me out, if i can keep it from getting killed, can i keep it?
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September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #7...
1. Unicorn 'water'??? *gotta laugh at that one* :-D
...though what you told Unneeded gotz me kinda nervous. *_*
2. I must say I was surprised you used 'wolfweres' in this one,
I must admit it's not an often used word in the creature myth
vocabulary AND most people/authors have never heard of them.
3. Why..oh WHY does Prof. Klein have my hackles up..and couldn't
Draco be a little bit sneakier? But, then again he didn't go to the School
of Sneakiness, with Harry Potter as Headmaster.
1. Unicorn 'water'??? *gotta laugh at that one* :-D
...though what you told Unneeded gotz me kinda nervous. *_*
2. I must say I was surprised you used 'wolfweres' in this one,
I must admit it's not an often used word in the creature myth
vocabulary AND most people/authors have never heard of them.
3. Why..oh WHY does Prof. Klein have my hackles up..and couldn't
Draco be a little bit sneakier? But, then again he didn't go to the School
of Sneakiness, with Harry Potter as Headmaster.
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September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it just keeps snowballing for Har huh. One thing after another... ah well, at least this way the wolfwere (novel thought btw. The only other place I've heard of one is Terry Pratchett)knows what happened and can mourn it's cubs.
I am hoping that eventually Malfoy and Har will trust each other enough that Har can bring him ingredient hunting as he was an infinitely better potions student than Har.
as for why he was out in the woods... he followed one or the other, didn't he? silly git.
I am hoping that eventually Malfoy and Har will trust each other enough that Har can bring him ingredient hunting as he was an infinitely better potions student than Har.
as for why he was out in the woods... he followed one or the other, didn't he? silly git.
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
they might not be but i think you make them come together pretty well.
I really do like this fic. It's a nice balance for some of the scarier, darker ones.
Despite all Harry has taken on, it's still got a very light hearted feel to it. I hope Har can handle all he's taken on.
I really do like this fic. It's a nice balance for some of the scarier, darker ones.
Despite all Harry has taken on, it's still got a very light hearted feel to it. I hope Har can handle all he's taken on.
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #6..
Been meaning to ask you, have you ever had
anyone help you with the dialogue between main
characters or does it come natural for you, when
you do conversations between two people?
Been meaning to ask you, have you ever had
anyone help you with the dialogue between main
characters or does it come natural for you, when
you do conversations between two people?
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I didn't have any time whatsoever during the past weeks but just letting you know that I'm really enjoying this story :)
Really intrigued by Snape and Draco, and I liked the idea of the triad spell (and that Harry's casting the spell would flash bright green).
Btw, you seem to be insanely productive!
Really intrigued by Snape and Draco, and I liked the idea of the triad spell (and that Harry's casting the spell would flash bright green).
Btw, you seem to be insanely productive!
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #5...
1. By the end of the speech, Hermione was grinding her teeth and glaring at him,
-I don't know why but that struck me as funny. :-)
He shot Harry a gleaming smile, and Harry resisted, manfully, the temptation to use a Blasting Curse on those white, white teeth.
-then I saw this one. :-D
2. When it comes to writing scenes that deal with the classroom, do you draw from experience?
Do you see writing action scenes as your strong point?
1. By the end of the speech, Hermione was grinding her teeth and glaring at him,
-I don't know why but that struck me as funny. :-)
He shot Harry a gleaming smile, and Harry resisted, manfully, the temptation to use a Blasting Curse on those white, white teeth.
-then I saw this one. :-D
2. When it comes to writing scenes that deal with the classroom, do you draw from experience?
Do you see writing action scenes as your strong point?