schedule
October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Police who don't use deadly force, hmm, well they are in England so maybe it's realistic.
schedule
October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I not sure to feel sorry for Klein or to hate her.
schedule
October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11
Eeeee! That was exciting! I can't believe he just killed Greyback right there in front of all those aurors who'd just failed, but will the blood have any effect on him? I imagine that if saliva is enough to pass on the transformation, then any blood, particularly if it ended up in his eyes or mouth, would have some effects. I'm desperately loving this, and can't wait to see what happens when Draco gets out of that bubble. Methinks he's not going to be too pleased.
Eeeee! That was exciting! I can't believe he just killed Greyback right there in front of all those aurors who'd just failed, but will the blood have any effect on him? I imagine that if saliva is enough to pass on the transformation, then any blood, particularly if it ended up in his eyes or mouth, would have some effects. I'm desperately loving this, and can't wait to see what happens when Draco gets out of that bubble. Methinks he's not going to be too pleased.
schedule
October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About 11.... Whoa! Go Harry! O_o [its hard reviewing on a cell]. Anyway I'm feeling Harrys frustrations..what is it that Draco wants him to figure out?
schedule
October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter!!! um u might want to fix this sentence "Ron didn't mind if he ate with his mouth full" it is in the very begining and i think u menant to use talk insted of ate^.^ other than that i really enjoyed the chapter~~^.^
schedule
October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn, missed a chappie. :/
Klien really has no clue how to handle Har does she? Fortunately the head auror seems to. Winces on har's behalf. yup, he just stuck his foot in it hard core. Malfoy is so twitchy and on edge AND he owes Har his life, so he's not going to take this well at all.
on to the next chappie
... 0_o' Did Har just kill Fenrir Greyback?!
Heh, snickers, Malfoy in a bubble anyone? Fun mental image that one *imagines a malfoy beach ball.
Snape, you dick! Damn, he'd better appreciate this.
Klien really has no clue how to handle Har does she? Fortunately the head auror seems to. Winces on har's behalf. yup, he just stuck his foot in it hard core. Malfoy is so twitchy and on edge AND he owes Har his life, so he's not going to take this well at all.
on to the next chappie
... 0_o' Did Har just kill Fenrir Greyback?!
Heh, snickers, Malfoy in a bubble anyone? Fun mental image that one *imagines a malfoy beach ball.
Snape, you dick! Damn, he'd better appreciate this.
schedule
October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Harry is definitely kicking ass and taking names!
schedule
October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow I'm just lovin this fic. Theres not a single thing I would even think to complain about. Very well written.
schedule
October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #10...
*looks at title* Let me guess...dancing with the stars, right? :-]
I had a thought how it would be ironic if Klein became Deputy Headmistress
of Hogwarts, Merlin help the students...all in all, this chapter was kinda
tense, with the powerplay.
*looks at title* Let me guess...dancing with the stars, right? :-]
I had a thought how it would be ironic if Klein became Deputy Headmistress
of Hogwarts, Merlin help the students...all in all, this chapter was kinda
tense, with the powerplay.
schedule
October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #9...
Well now, this is definitely going in a
different direction, fer shure.. :-)
Makes me wonder, just WHAT exactly you got
planned for this story.
Well now, this is definitely going in a
different direction, fer shure.. :-)
Makes me wonder, just WHAT exactly you got
planned for this story.