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about #16...

FINALLY! We make some headway, the truth about
what happened...and Draco needs to practice
some serious grovelling to his friends, once
this mess is cleared up.

Well that explains a lot. Har may be just being Har but Draco will never forget this... or what he owes Har

That chapter was a little disturbing...

Klein meekness surprised me. Is she playing that? I hope that pin was not some kind tracking device, because Snape will be exposed. Poor professor, after HP7, when I found out his story, I could not stop think how sad his life was. Ehm, and Draco is in trouble, well what is his secret? What he wished to hide so much? I can t wait.

about #15...

Dun..Dun..DUN! Ladies & Gentlemen, let the twist
in the story commence! Oooo... O_o

My, my...so what lil' secret has Drakie-poo have
to hide? Hope Harry doesn't 'beat' it out of him
too bad.

...and when is Severus EVER going to get out of the
Love..I mean the Shrieking Shack, will this potion of
his work?

and the plot thickens!

*shakes head at draco. Seriously boy, get your priorities straight. what's more important, your pride or your life?! No wonder Snape was disinclined to help. What a silly little git. How can Har do anything if he doesn't have all the facts to work with?
Interesting, Klien can admit her faults... don't know if it'll be enough to coax Har back to Auror consideration though. At least Har is willing to compromise enough to work with her now.
As for the wolfwere, considering Fen was completely nutters... would it be a good idea to ingest that... 0.o
It will be interesting to see if Har's theory was right and there is someone else out there tugging strings.
Will Snape be up to brewing his freedom potion soon?
Green huh. Nothing with Har can ever be simple can it. It'll be interesting to find out what yellow means.

Wow, I think that is Draco's miscast spell. Why is he asking for help but won't tell this? Go Harry. Go Snape. Hermione and Ron are nice.

Ehm, I didn t intended to chide you for not updating W.I.P and I am really sorry it sounded like that. It is just, that usually when, I make hearty comment to stories I like, they tent to go on hiatus and I just don t understant, why. I suspect that it have something to do with my life don t going according any plan, timetable or resolution. Like when you want to see a movie next evening and cinema is closed for technical reason at that specific day (worse and silly life occurences happened)or author struggling with they musa not kicking them suddenly, not best comparison, sorry. Babbling, ehm, I didn t meant to be rude with my last comment or this one, I suppose, I wanted to know how often this will be updated and I am happy that next chapter is already here, because I kept daydreaming about outcome of cliffhanger. It was little bit disturbing how selfishly Draco demanded help from himself from Snape, and it also showed he cared for potion master and don t want him leave (I dont want that either). Snape was just right, that he didn t want Draco involved in his come back to life matters. Draco and Severus discusion make me feel like they are trully Slyntherins, and I can hear what they are talking about, but I don t understand everything- especially about why they persuade completely they decisions and don t try on compromise. Harry sudden resolution, that maybe he can be healer is surprising, especially when he can t brew and I can t wait which carier will he pull off in the end. Elder wand, will he really use it? Why would he not just mend Draco wand like his own? It is too much devastated?

Wonderful update! I didn't expect Snape to really cooperate.