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about #18...

*laughing* Good Lord! Of all the things happening in this chapter,
you just HAD to spring on unsuspecting readers the pain poor
Harry was experiencing talking to someone with fish
breathe! :-)

Whyyy!!!

Seriously you had me laughing.

Wonderful! I have to get to bed now. I have class at 10am.

Oh alright, I had thought not. Do we find out what happened between Harry and Ginny later or is it just not relevant. Honestly though this chapter was absolutely adorable. I wanted to just hug Draco for being so shy and silly; while I understand Harry bring short with him I think Draco's honesty held a lot of merit in this chapter. I'm happy they are starting over as friends, now they can build that up before moving onto a different kind of relationship ;). I can't help but wonder how Ron and Hermonie would take this new friendship, though knowing these two they won't act like friends in public. I do hope we get to see more Snape in the next chapter, or the dealings with Dark Wizards, werewolves all of that. This conversation was important but these boys need a few more substantial events to really bring them together. As always good chapter, it felt so short! I was done reading much too quickly. Keep up the good work and I look forward to whatever else you update next, particularly Sanctom.

~Fullmoon

D'awww. Kodak moment if ever there was one. ^^
So are they going to make their new friendship public?

Definitely hints of slash here, I love how one story decides to relieve me of the pain of a cliffhanger while the other decides to start up. Anyway, I do enjoy that they are starting to take notice in each other. I do wonder what Draco, widened his eyes at. Also who is Ginny with? I don't remember of that was mentioned, did they break up for the summer?

Poor Snape still locked up but I'm glad he decided to help Draco. As per usual great chapter, and I look forward to your next update; please keep up the good work.

~Fullmoon

well, that's an ominous place to leave things... still, Har had a sort of advanced notice.
:P I should have realized past influences (being dead etc) would have had an effect on on things.

about #17...

What the bloody hell kind of spell was that...and why
am I speaking British slang?

I'm glad we are making progress. Excellent update!

And as always your stories are much too fantastic for my own good. Now I will be waiting for updates from three titles instead of one, your writing truly is addicting in its own right. I truly enjoy how you have portrayed Harry in this, he seems as you said the most normal out of most of your stories, but more than that he's strong, which is a big plus. Draco seems a bit weak but considering his being under a spell and everything else, it fits and ties into his character. I know you have mentioned this story to be more gen, which is great but I find myself wondering if you are going to make it more slash later? I'm curious as to how you would, since Draco probably won't spend time with Harry and vice versa once the spell is removed. As usual I am looking forward to the next chapter. Please keep up the good work.

Well, that was SECRET. I understand that Draco wanted his friend to forget about him torturing one of them, but why he tortured Blaise in first place...well, I would say- He needs help with his post war symptoms, or another issues (stupidity, ehm, or competition spirit). That memory replacing spell can be a hard one, if Lockhart could not get his fix. I somehow find myself think, that longer Slytherins will be under spell, harder it will be removed. Slytherins already made real experiences and acted like that one memory was real. So now they have ones that are really real(hurting Draco) and emotions to put with them, so Harry and Draco would need cut, destroy or reshape all of them for each Slytherin to go back to their original mental and emotional state. I find that impossible, if Mungo